Pretty Baby.

Mm, well it's a happy, more upbeat poem. I like it. Even if it is short. :]

I’ve been watching for some time, pretty baby, and I like what I see.
I could easily fall for a guy like you.
So what do you say, pretty baby, do you like me?
Then come on and make my dreams come true.

 

©SRM '08

Author's Note

Umm... other than ignore the shortness of it, I got nothing to say. Review away. Be honest, though. I hate a lying critic...

Reviews

[Jacquelene Vanessa More..]

i enjoy the title, it could do with out the question. i suggest taking out the and's but other than that i like the subject matter