november

an encounter

i will never forget november
the little room
with the white door
on the eighth floor
at work!
cool but cozy
us, crazy strangers
holding, hugging, kissing, rocking
slow dancing to no music
you smelled and tasted
of marlboro cigarettes
my new favorite scent

Reviews

[Sherry Lynn]

The best thing about romance is the scent of that special someone and the way it embeds upon on memories -- how something so little can last a lifetime.

[Katrina Mckeown]

short and romantic.

[myrto]

Very interesting meter. It's very evocative and romantic. It encapsulates the essence of november. Excellent.

[Charlotte Haran]

This is simple, but very, very sweet! When thinking of November, I think of the cold, and the rain. And yet your peom seemed to add a sense of warmth to the month. A good and reassuring read!