Sweet Bygone..

Creation who saw sin,
Rolling like a dice in cold,
Shivering on edge of time,
"Life should be loved", unfold.

Reasons to feel proud,
For those who, once looked up,
Like a lost face amidst the crowd,
Leap of faith, an end scene pack up.

Sketch of a child, and a spoon of salt,
Aim, looking for a dart,
Newly born, an arrival so scorn !!!
Benumbed frequencies of heart.

Unknown alley,where mind dwells,
Dark street balcony view, nothing else,
Other side of rigid grills,
End of expectations, end of thrills.

Sailed away, sweet bygone,
Your stains look red like blood...

Reviews

[Richard Patrick]

That was beautiful, you have allowed us feel how you felt.
We blame ourselves for errors of others. The thing we have to
do is pull ourselves out of the maw of depression. We are worthy
of love. You have to believe that you are able to see the good in yourself.
You were able to be loved as you felt that way. And where you were
was in love. Believe you are worthy of it, never give up on yourself.

[Ibidun]

Like one who see's life flash before his eyes one more time before he dies... The need to cherish every heart beat before it passes away . beautiful piece