Song of a shadow

Broken heart passenger,
Riding dismal acceptance level,
Those who care ,trying to prettify life,
But again, everything goes in vain!!

Silence craving to break free,
From a land where worries dance with angels,
Wounded ashes , a song of shadow,
Cornered in meadows of mind.

First love above,
Life changed its way like itself,
Needless lies, ashen sky,
Waiting for clouds to gather.

Snap of screams in a sea of dreams,
Where sorrow sways with you,
Paving stones getting rustier,
Like an image of mazed eyes.

Unseen selfies of emotions,
Broken lense, an art of dying..

Reviews

[anne]

"Unseen selfies of emotions,
Broken lense, an art of dying..."
I really love the end of your poem. It's really powerful and does a lot for the overall feeling of it. Nice work!

[Ron]

Thanks.The end always matters to me in a way so.... :-)