Building Blocks

Building Blocks

A Poem by Cordell

I’m crying, dying, slowly trying
To build what you tore down
I’m living, smiling, breathing
With the new life I found
Anticipated my long escape
Finally I took that chance
Now in a better place
And not looking back
You destroyed my life
Made it harder to recover
You built lies
And now they’re over
You made me believe
I was ugly, a fake, a creep
When in fact
You weren’t talking about me
You were reflecting yourself
And for that moment I believed
It was me, it was me
But it never was, never will
I am greater than you have ever said
The pride I had you once killed
Is lying with you in the bed
Oh wait it’s empty, no ones there
Never was, never will be
And I don’t care
Now I loosen the chains
Broke the locks
The real me remains
As I’m building blocks…

S.H.

© 2011 Cordell


Author's Note

Cordell
Building blocks is my term for building a new life...

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wow, great read. definitely goes well with a beat. good first line, and good last ones. the part about reflection embodies the whole poem and what you're expressing in general really well.

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Cordell
Cordell

CMD, PA



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Been writing poetry since 1992! It was a project for high school and ever since I loved it! My poems tend to be more gothic, and about suicide and depression and the darkside of life. Sometimes there .. more..

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