I SEE YOU

that is the way somebody see 'someone'

I SEE YOU

 

When I see your face, Sparkling

Thousands little stars shape your face

If I try to paint your picture face

And I will choose glittering stars

To start as the main points of my drawing

And I will ally them by silk strings from red rays of twilight 

 

Because you brighten up my gloomy heart

And for a long time try to find, to cure me from pain

But I never find it

 

But now, I’ve found my medicine

When I’ve missed your face so long

And I never I never realize it until I met you again this time

I can smile again and really feel the effect of warmness of sun that day

Hit under skin through blood

Then bring it from all sides to one destination, to my heart

 

You help me to find myself

Author's Note

crazyness sometimes bad for me while great in a certain place, i think

Reviews

[Laughing-Bear]

My Dear Writing Friend, I loved the start of your poem that likens a face to thousands of stars. It reminds me of how I look for the Great Mystery while I’m mushing my dogs under the stars here in Alaska. I always wonder is he peaking down at me from somewhere in the heavens? Can I see the outline of his face in the stars? I think so and put those thoughts in my poem With Straight Eyes.
I loved your last line of verse one which says “And I will ally them by silk strings from red rays of twilight: I thought your chosen words by silk strings from red rays of twilight was very beautiful.
You have painted with words a unique picture that reflects the beauty of your soul, well done.

Blessings, Laughing-Bear

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Its wonderful, deeply emotional and nice words flow...
I like it ...

[SilentDreamer]

Because you brighten up my gloomy heart

And for a long time try to find, to cure me from pain

But I never find it

~~Love those lines and the last. Great job, great poetry. Keep writing!