Musing Of a Loner

Sometimes the dream bring to fantasy that is unreal, but this is my world

MUSING OF A LONER

 

One night in the evening

The night was cold, wind blue from sea

My face hit by wind, it shook anything it faced

The trees were shaken irregularly but made a regular tone

Sounded romantic

 

I felt something different

My skin was cold

But it touched my heart, to be warm

When the sound of bamboos’ leaves and the waves of sea

Broken into the rocks

Seemed like the song of angel

 

The sound sang for me melodiously

And the angel came, hug me, warmth me.

My fear turned to be save

And a lonely being accompanied by the angel

 

The angel is a beauty; charm me, a “Lady”

I thought she kissed me then flied up higher and higher to the sun

 

I looked at her when she went on left me

I decided to flied up to sky

Chased my angel,

But I couldn’t went after her, my wings weakened

And the light was flashing my eyes

 

I flied down, come back to my mind on earth

I was aware sitting alone in a little cottage

Opened my eyes, in the dark, I smiled

 

By: Vitcky Walker

Author's Note

Too Scare

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

I think there is something very sad yet beautiful in this poem. It brings a feel of loneliness and longing, of wanting love or perhaps something more. I love the imagery in this too. It brings forth the scene to the reader. A really nice poem, very well done, I think.

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

interesting nice work