SIXTEEN - AthertonA Chapter by Justin Xavier SmithAtherton discovers a greater threat to Xantom.Down. That’s the only direction Atherton was positive they were
going. The cave tunnels twisted and
turned, but the one thing that never changed was the downward slope. Draven led the way, followed by Hadrian, his wife Ecclesia,
and a few others who had agreed to take the journey. Atherton stayed in the rear, following
closely in the others’ footsteps so as not to get lost in a side tunnel, or
slip and crack his skull. It seems like we’ve been walking for
hours. But you can’t ask how much longer
or they’re going to think you’re weak. He
had tried asked where they were going, but he got the same answer: “You’ll see when we get there.” If we
ever manage to get there. His body felt exhausted.
If walking through the freezing Barelands and getting knocked unconscious
wasn’t enough, he hadn’t managed to sleep very well the night before. He was worried about his siblings, about
whether Xanthus had been able to find them, and on top of that his head
throbbed constantly. However much sleep
he had gotten, it wasn’t enough. Every step sent another wave of pain through his body. Each wave crashed into his skull. It was hard to focus, but he fought
through. Maybe we should have waited to do this on another day. But he didn’t dare complain. Draven had piqued his curiosity and now he
couldn’t stop until he learned what was at the bottom of the cave. But
honestly, they didn’t have to knock me out. If they had just announced themselves, I
probably would have stopped swinging my knife around like a crazy person. “Hey,” Meridian said, coming up from behind him. Atherton jumped, skidding on the wet ground. He barely caught himself on the wall. How is
it possible to move so quietly in these caves? “You scared me half to death,” he said. “That scared you
half to death? Can’t imagine what seeing
something actually frightening would do to you,” she said with a smirk. “I’m just not used to it out here.” “Well, get used to
it. I can’t have you dying on me. Do you have any idea what it’s like to have no one your own age around?” She was right. Atherton
was the youngest person in the group, followed closely by Meridian. After that there was a huge gap before
hitting the next person up. Nobody out
here was having children. “Were you exiled recently?”
Atherton asked her. “I don’t
remember any other young people being exiled.
But then, I never attended the ceremonies anyway.” “I was born out here.” “Oh. Where’s your mother?”
Before the words were out of his mouth,
he knew what the answer was. “She’s dead,” she said. “Never really knew her. I think I’m the last of my kind out
here. Probably the last there ever will
be. It feels kind of cool, you know?” I have no idea what
you’re talking about. “The last of
what kind?” He could almost hear the eye-roll before she spoke. “People born in exile. Nobody wants to bring life into this
world. Not after what we’ve found.” “Which is what?” She cracked a huge smile.
“You’ll see soon enough. We’re
almost there.” Atherton let out a huff of air. “You sound just like your father.” “He is my father…”
she let that sink in for a second. “We’ll talk later,” she said, running ahead to
be with her father. Draven wrapped an
arm around her shoulders and they walked together. “Be careful with that one.”
The voice came from out of the darkness behind Atherton. Atherton spun around, reaching for his knife. I
thought I was at the back of the line.
It was an old man with a long, wispy white beard that swayed below his
waist. He hunched over and walked slowly
with an obvious limp. I’m surprised he can even walk through these
caves. “You don’t have to be afraid of me. Even if I meant to hurt you, I’m not sure I’d
be capable. I’m Whittaker.” He extended a hand. Atherton shook it. “Atherton.” “I know.” Of course he knows. I’m the only new person around here. Don’t be an idiot. Whittaker seemed unaware of his
existential crisis and continued talking.
“Meridian is fiercely intelligent and independent, like her father. You’ll have to sharpen your mind if you want
to be able to keep up with her. The
other day she asked me how long it’s been since I’ve been with a woman. Can you believe that? Just came out of nowhere. When she talks to you, it’s like doing
battle"you have to be ready for anything.
But it seems she’s taken an interest in you.” “An interest? In me?
She doesn’t know me.” Whittaker chuckled. “That’s
why she’s taken an interest. If she knew
you, she’d probably be bored.” “What is that supposed to mean?” “I didn’t mean anything by it. I don’t know you, either. Just keep your eyes and your mind open. She’s probably going to test you.” That sounds exhausting. “I don’t think I’m ready for a test. I didn’t get much sleep last night.” “Nobody does on their first day. But you’d better catch up quick before she
tears you apart!” he said, laughing. There’s a lot of
laughter out here. There was never any
room for laughing in the Outskirts. But
people out here seem so… happy. Does it
have anything to do with what they’re about to show me? He slipped on a wet patch on the ground and stopped to catch
his breath. “We’ve been walking for too
long,” he said. “If you walk with me, you’ll have an excuse for going a
little slower. Everyone forgets how hard
it is to get through these caves for the first time.” “How do you manage?” “Do you think I’m incapable?” Whittaker said. “No, I"that’s not what I meant! I just thought, you know, you could have
stayed back with the others. It’d be
more comfortable, and"” Whittaker started laughing.
“I’m only kidding. Draven and the
others have told me to stay back plenty of times. They said I’d be safer, less likely to hurt
myself. But I like going on these little
walks. They make me feel young again. And I like coming down here to remind myself
what’s really going on in this Dome.
It’s humbling, in a way.” “How long have you been out here?” “As long as I can remember.
Not that that’s saying much, my memory isn’t so great anymore.” “Were you born out here?” “No. But before you go
assuming something about me that isn’t true, I wasn’t exiled either. My parents decided that it was better to
strike out on our own than sit around and wait for the King to provide for
us. No matter how hard they worked or
how much they sacrificed, we still needed more.
I was only a baby at the time.
But the decision must have worked out okay. I’m still here.” “That’s crazy. So
you’ve been out here a long time.” “Very long. “I don’t know why I never even considered the possibility of
leaving the city by choice. It makes sense, but it never occurred to me.” “It wouldn’t. When you
don’t know what’s out here, and all you know is what you hear, it seems crazy
to try to go out on your own, like suicide.
But then, life is what you make it.
You can never really trust anything you’re told unless you see it for
yourself. That’s the biggest reason
Draven always brings the new people down here to see it for themselves. That way you can’t dismiss it as hearsay.” Atherton felt fear rising in his chest and remained silent. Where
are they taking me? He had plenty of time to ponder the question. They walked for another half hour in
silence. Just as he was beginning to
think they would never arrive, Draven signaled for everyone to stop. “We’re here.” Atherton took a deep breath and moved forward through the
darkness. Whatever this is, it’s big.
Things are going to change. It’s
enough to make everyone stop having babies and apparently means the doom of our
entire civilization. And I’m about to
see it firsthand. I hope I’m ready for
this. He walked past Dragomir, who was holding a torch above his
head, casting the light in a larger circle to help light the way. As he passed, he looked up and met the man’s
eyes. Apparently Dragomir could see
Atherton’s fear, because he twisted his mouth into a reassuring smile and
nodded, as if to say, “It’s going to be okay.” He stepped out of the tunnel and into a wide, open space. At the other end of the open cavern, Draven
and Meridian were waiting beside the wall, holding their torches and watching
Atherton’s approach. He continued
forward slowly. I don’t see anything yet. It’s
supposed to be right here, but what am I looking at? He was close enough that he should have
been able to see anything that was different or wrong, but nothing was
immediately apparent. “What is it?” He asked. “Look closer,” Draven said, moving his torch closer to the
wall. Atherton squinted, adjusting to the
slight change in lighting… and then he saw it.
In this particular spot, the wall wasn’t made up of the rock that formed
the rest of the cave. This small section
of the wall shimmered in the light in a familiar way that Atherton remembered
from his childhood. He reached forward to touch it, but already knew how it was
going to feel"cold and wet. He ran his
fingers along the surface, which didn’t disappoint. When he pulled his hand away, the places he
had touched glowed yellow for a moment before fading away. “The Dome,” he said simply. His eyes traced the outline of this space in
the wall. It was around four feet wide
and seven feet high. Outside of that,
the cave wall intruded and took over, spreading outwards to create the space
they were in. “You didn’t feel anything odd about it?” Draven asked. “Try again.” Atherton, growing frustrated, reached forward to feel the
Dome again. “Why don’t you just tell me
what I’m looking for? It doesn’t have to
be a big"” That was when he felt it.
A crack. The width of the section
of the Dome was split almost exactly in half by the crack, which ran from the
top of the open space all the way down to the floor. At the bottom, a stream of cold water trickled
through. Atherton lifted his hand to his
mouth to taste the water. He spit and
rubbed his hand off on his clothes.
Drywater. “It’s cracked,” he said. “And the water that surrounds us is leaking through,” Draven
explained. “The Dome is flooding. It won’t be long before all of Xantom and the
Barelands are under water.” Suddenly everything was clear. Everyone
is going to die. Every single
person. No wonder they aren’t having
children anymore. “How long has this been happening?” he asked. “We don’t know. We
found it a few years ago. It’s a slow
leak, and we have no idea how long it will actually take before the whole Dome
is flooded, but it’s happening. And we
can’t stop it. We’ve tried to plug it,
but nothing holds the water back.” “I haven’t heard anything… does anybody else know? Do the people in Xantom know?” Draven sighed. “We’ve
been trying to tell the King since we first discovered it. But he hasn’t exactly made it easy.
It’s hard enough to get into the city.
And if you do manage to get in, it’s a delicate subject. You can’t just blurt out, ‘oh, hey, the Dome
is flooding and we’re all going to die.’
Even if you tell him you’ve seen it with your own eyes, he’s going to
want to see it, too. Then when you start
to lead him towards the Barelands, he’s going to assume it’s a trap and have
you executed or exiled. But we have to
tell the King"he’s the only one with any power.
And if we told anyone else, there would be chaos. Widespread panic. Quintessa has gone in twice to try and speak
with him. Both times, she was exiled
before she even had a chance to bring it up.” “But… the people in Xantom are focusing their energy on the
wrong thing! What good is finding food
going to do them if there’s no land left to stand on?” “We don’t know how serious it is, or how long it’s been
happening. It could be years before the
flooding becomes a legitimate threat. If
they don’t have food, they won’t survive long enough to worry about the
flooding. People are focused on making
it to tomorrow. Let them put their focus
where they will, and the King can deal with the bigger picture for now. Life is hard enough without the knowledge
that after a few more tomorrows, there won’t be any left. We need to figure out a way to solve the problem.” “Where does the water go?”
Atherton squatted to watch the water trickle in. He saw that it headed downhill, towards a
large rock formation that appeared to have caved in from above. Around the base of the rocks, the water had
formed a massive pool that filled almost half the cavern. “Is there more behind the rocks?” “We don’t know,” Draven said.
“Those rocks are too big to move.
They’ve been there since we first found this place, so we have no idea
when they got there. If there is
anything behind them, it’s probably completely underwater.” Atherton suddenly felt ill.
Everyone he ever knew was going to die.
Of course, everyone dies eventually, but it felt different somehow,
knowing that life wouldn’t continue afterwards.
There’s no hope for us. He fell to his knees, barely registering
the pain of the hard stone digging into his skin. “We have to fix this.
If the only way to do that is to talk to the King, then that’s what we
have to do,” Atherton said. “We’ve been trying,” Quintessa said. “It isn’t as easy as you think.” “We have to try harder.
Even if we have to tell him the truth about who we are and how we know.” “He’ll kill us if we do that,” Draven said. “Well, we’re all going to do anyway, right?” “How do you propose we do this?” Draven said. “Like I said, Quintessa has been exiled twice
just trying to get a word in.” “I’ll do it myself.” “He just exiled you.
He’ll remember you, and he’ll kill you.
If you can even get past the guards.” “I know a way in.
There’s a secret crack in the wall around the city… nobody knows about
it except for me.” Draven went silent for a moment. Suddenly his tone became deadly serious. “Are you certain?” “Yes. I used to use it
all the time to get food for my family.
Nobody knows it’s there.” Draven turned towards the others. “This is it,” he said to no one in
particular. “This is what we’ve been
waiting for.” He turned back to
Atherton. “And you would be willing to
lead us inside?” “Yes. And once we get
in to talk to Xanthus, I can tell him everything. I don’t think he’ll kill us; he respects
me. He’s taking care of my brother and
sister.” “Do you have any idea what this means?” Draven asked
him. “You were sent to us. The Dome wanted
you here, to save us all.” He turned to
the rest of the group and spoke louder.
“It looks like we found exactly what we needed!” The entire cave filled with the sounds of cheering and
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StatsAuthorJustin Xavier SmithLos Angeles, CAAboutMy name is Justin Smith. I am a writer, actor, and filmmaker. I am fascinated by human behavior and the weird things that we find "shameful" or that we are unwilling to talk about. So I talk about the.. more..Writing
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