Into the Night

Thrum Thrum beats the drum

Beckoning us to fight

Till blood is shed

And we have won

We march into the night

Run Run oh great force

Menacing is our plight

But what is more

The heavenly courts

We run into the night

Swing Swing that bloodied sword

Trembling they are with fright

From dust they are

And dust restored

We clash into the night

Shout Shout the end is near

Reckoning is in sight

Run you fools

There's much to fear

They flee into the night

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Brilliant piece!!! I could hear this being voice narrated by someone like
Morgan Freeman in some award winning movie. Thanks for sharing and b-blessed.

[Dark Rider]

Okay, this was just amazing. This has got to be my favorite battle song I have ever read. You did such an amazing job describing scene without really going into a lot of detail, which still leaves me in awe. Awesome job, Mowery. :)

[Neon]

Nice rhyme.. i enjoyed reading the poem. Working style is good.

[Phantom Heart]

I like the way you play with your words. The pace is great too, its goes perfectly with the poem.

[Mark]

Very great write here. War, and the drums. I enjoyed it.

[Hester Vane]

A great sense of the epic, I love the rhyme and structure too because it helps set the tone of war/battle song. Great piece

[Traci]

Very deep with emotions that are felt throughout the entire poem. Nicely penned. This is my first read of yours, definitely looking forward to more, NB

[Nix]

Thank you for your review Traci!

[Zahra]

A really interesting and wonderfuly penned poem. Very nice.

[Nix]

Thank you for your review!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The old style of fighting...true at arms with the sound of the drums...and charge..the fight was more dramatic in those days...

[Nix]

Very true! That's why it's so much fun to write about! Thank you for your review!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...the fighting was also more gruesome...you did not die quickly...so suffered a bit longer...

[Inda]

This is fantastic, it's a cheer that's catchy and quite eerie. Great job!

[Nix]

Thank you! Hopefully it'll get stuck in your head...