The Portal

Magnificence

What do I see as I gaze upon 

These wondrous titans that shape the dawn

Their forms caress the florid sky 

Their peaks they tempt the weak to fly

Their slopes they stir the wary hearted

To change their pace and trek uncharted

They talk amongst the moon and stars

And speak of worlds both near and far

I cannot fathom them from below 

Their beauty instills the greatest of woes 

They tower above all that is mortal 

For we are just vessels and they are the portal

Reviews

[Matching Socks]

This one is special, I love it.
Gave me shivers.

[Mia]

We’re arrogant things…people. This write puts things into perspective…people have come and gone…admire their beauty as will we as will people after us! Beautiful write…I especially love the lines…
“Their slopes they stir the wary hearted
To change their pace and trek uncharted
They talk amongst the moon and stars”

[Nix]

Thank you Mia!

[Inda]

Great immagery and flow, another flawless piece. Fantastic!

[Dark Rider]

Amazing details and flow. I love how you write your poems. They just come to life. I loved it. Great job! :)

[Phantom Heart]

Sweet. Great flow. "What do I see as I gaze upon
These wondrous titans that shape the dawn
Their forms caress the florid sky
Their peaks they tempt the weak to fly"

Man I read this poem like 5 times and liked it more each time! :)

[Nix]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Perfection, I may have to walk within this portal!

[Eddie Phillips]

Pure illumination! I loved the sweet and descriptive style of this poem.

[Nix]

Thank you Eddie!

[Hester Vane]

I like the sense of epic and folklore that flows through this piece. A great poem

[Nix]

Thank you! Epic is my middle name....

[Rebecca Buller]

A very beautiful write and the photo you posted with this is simply stunning. I can actually see this mountain's magnificence in my head:)

[Nix]

Thank you Rebecca! This is specifically about the Sierra Madres in Monterrey, Mexico. They have to be one of the most beautiful mountain ranges I have seen.

[Rebecca Buller]

Very cool!! They certainly seem to inspire great poetry:-)

[A. H. Pinley]

Massive rock spring up from the crust kissing the heavens above with complimenting beauty. Nice write!

[Nix]

Thank you!