War Words

War Words

A Poem by Vitae2423
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The effect words have on people positive or negative.

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Words stinging
Pains bringing
Weapons---mouths
Bullets-----words
STOP
Knowing there is a problem
Is the first step 
To fix it

© 2013 Vitae2423


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Vitae2423
First poem on here. Thoughts?

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I like it, I think the ending is strong, and its a good message. If I were to suggest any changes, how about taking out they're and replacing ammunition with bullets so it would read:

Words stinging
Pains bringing
Weapons---mouths
Bullets-----words
STOP
Knowing there is a problem
Is the first step
To fix it

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I like it, I think the ending is strong, and its a good message. If I were to suggest any changes, how about taking out they're and replacing ammunition with bullets so it would read:

Words stinging
Pains bringing
Weapons---mouths
Bullets-----words
STOP
Knowing there is a problem
Is the first step
To fix it

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 19, 2013
Last Updated on September 25, 2013
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Love is the ground that holds us strong and together. Through writing I believe we can build infinte love for everyone. more..