If I Fall

My clock is counting down

My time is running out

No prayers will save me now

And I have no one to turn to

No one but you

 

My past is catching up to me

Are you still there for me

My deadly sins are resurfacing

Do you still trust me

Will you leave me with no one but myself

 

If I fall will you just leave me there

To die in the dark

If I fall will you just leave me there

To drown in my own fears

If I fall will you just leave me there

Or will you pick me up and save my from the nightmares

 

My fears are coming back

And the dangers follow close behind

So will you help me fight

Will you take my side

Or will I have to face loneliness once again

 

My time is finally up

My clock has cracked

And as the sands of time blow away from me

The dark slowly begins to stalk me

Waiting for its chance to have me in its icy grip

 

If I fall will you just leave me there

To die in the dark

If I fall will you just leave me there

To drown in my own fears

If I fall will you just leave me there

Or will you pick me up and save my from the nightmares

 

I never put much faith in anyone

But now I can barely breathe

And I am hoping that you are there

To stop Death from reaping my soul

But I begin to wonder

 

If you fall with me will you stay

And perish in the dark and the fears

If you fall with me will you stay

And drown with me in our own tears

If you fall with me will you stay

Or will you pull me under just to save yourself

 

WILL YOU LEAVE ME ALONE IF I FALL........

Reviews

[John the Philosopher]

Such a deep and moving piece. Its the ultimate test of love and friendship written poetically by my favorite Sin.

[Japanese Cherry]

Haha, thank you luv!

[John the Philosopher]

Of course!

[durrya]

My time is finally up
My clock has cracked

These lines means a lot to me.

I never put much faith in anyone
But now I can barely breathe
And I am hoping that you are there
To stop Death from reaping my soul
But I begin to wonder

even in the clouds of despair, i can still see the rainbow of hope.

you are an amazing poet.

[Japanese Cherry]

thank you ever so much

[durrya]

you are welcome.

[scripted]

this is a really deep piece... nice job!!! yours truely

[Japanese Cherry]

many thanks for taking the time to read

[judith106]

" If you fall with me will you stay " That line makes the poem fore me. Awesome, glad to read this

[Japanese Cherry]

thank you very much for this review!

[corvus]

Wow I really liked this poem... it reminded me almost immediately of Pandora Hearts, the anime and manga, have you read/watched these? Really well written and I loved it~

[Japanese Cherry]

thank you for the review AND the anime/manga suggestion ^.^ i'll be sure to look for those

[corvus]

hehe, not at all~~ I actually should catch up on Pandora Hearts I'm so far behind omg...

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

I loved this poem. It so suspensive and enjoyable.
Excellent job!
100/100

[Japanese Cherry]

thank you very much!

[Invisible]

we all need someone to catch us fall, too bad someone isn't always around.

[Japanese Cherry]

i like the way you think, thanks for the review

[Invisible]

thank you, and you're welcome

[kayla]

This is really good. I enjoyed reading it. The emotion was easily relatable and well expressed(:

[Japanese Cherry]

i thank you very much for this review ^.^

[Elle M.]

I was kidding when I said I didn't like it I know it just pisses you off when I say stuff like that. This is actually very good. I can't write poems so congrats on the awesomeness! :) Ayla