Chapter 2: Cold Fellow

Chapter 2: Cold Fellow

A Chapter by Japanese Cherry
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The high school

-Saku Hana is opening the door to classroom 3-A

-Inside, the students are in a corner

-A girl is crying hysterically

-Saku goes to see who it is

“… Hiai? Hiai, is that you?!”

-Saku kneels down next the Hiai on the ground

-Hiai is crying with her head in her hands

“Hiai, talk to me! What happened?!”

-A student answers for her

“She got turned down by Kim Ji-Hoon…”

“And she is crying this bad over that?!”

-Irei and Goshippu walk up next to Saku

“I heard he was pretty harsh to her…” Irei comments

“Very cruel… the cruelest he has ever been…” Goshippu comments

-Saku attempts to get Hiai to speak to her

“Hiai, look at me and tell me what he said to you… Hiai, Hiai look at me, look-“

-Saku jumps in surprise when Hiai lifts her head… Blackened tears streak her face from her mascara, the pink from her blush smeared, puffy eyes from crying… she looks thinner too

“Nya! Um… I mean…”

-Hiai throws herself at Saku, crying into her chest

-Saku comforts her

“… He... He said… Why did you even approach me you bag of bones? You must not have any pride whatsoever… I guess your brain must be missing too! You have no shape to your skeleton of a body and your makeup looks like you turned into a clown! How can you even walk out your front door? And did you think you even had a shot at going out with me?! Get away from me… and make yourself at least look presentable when confessing your pathetic excuse for love!!”

-Saku is speechless… she actually admired Kim Ji-Hoon like everyone else did…

-Kim Ji-Hoon is extremely smart, multitalented, and hot… Saku ponders how she ever liked him

“He’s that cold?!”


Outside on campus grounds, Saku and Hiai are sitting with ice cream

“Do you feel better now?”

-Hiai shoves ice cream into her mouth and nods

-Saku had cleaned Hiai’s face up and bought her ice cream, now waiting for school to end

“Wait till I see that jerk!”

“Saku, please, don’t do anything”

-Saku goes into a fit of anger

“Are you kidding me?! How can I let this go?! That jerk has to be taught a lesson! No one ever stands up to him… he thinks he’s so great with his brains… and talent… and… so hot…”

-Saku face palms

“D****t! Uhg, how could me or any other girl had liked him?!”

-Hiai shuffles her feet

“Please don’t embarrass yourself…”

-The school bell rings and everyone begins to leave

-Saku waits patiently

-The screaming fan girls file out and in the middle are Kim Ji-Hoon and his band

-Saku looks at Hiai with an apologetic expression

“Too late for not making a fool outta myself…”

-Saku races of towards the crowd

-Kim Ji-Hoon has finally made his way through the fan girls with his group

-Saku is close now


And the fight begins...

“KIM JI-HOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”

-His band move to the side as Saku Hana runs up to Kim Ji-Hoon

-Just as Ji-Hoon turns to see who is calling him, Saku slaps him across the face

-Everyone’s jaws drop and silence follows

-Ji-Hoon’s two band members are laughing (Sugureta and Omoiagatta) while the last one is gawking in surprise (Amai)

-Kim Ji-Hoon’s expression is calm as he looks back at Saku Hana

-Saku begins angrily

“You cold-hearted b*****d!!”

-Ji-Hoon calmly replies

"Is that really as hard as you can slap, I've been slapped by a baby before and it slapped ten times worse then you."

-Saku Hana crosses her arms over her chest

"Why are you comparing me to a baby, smart a*s?! Oh forget it!”

-Saku shakes her head

“You know, there are better ways to put a girl down! No need to make her feel any worse than she needs to be!!”

-Ji-Hoon ponders the comment

“Ah… are you speaking about the skeleton clown?!”

“She has a name you jerk!!”

“That I don’t need to remember… anything else you need?”

“An apology!!”

“I don’t apologize to anyone honey… now get out of the way, we’re going to be late for our show… and, maybe you should clean your shirt, it’s a mess…”

-Ji-Hoon tries to walk away but Saku steps in his way

“My shirt is ruined by Hiai’s tears… and don’t call me honey you dickwad! And I really don’t give a rat’s a*s about your stupid concert! I want you to apologize to Hiai right now you son of a b***h!!”

-Ji-Hoon shakes his head and clucks his tongue

“What foul language… you must not have a big vocabulary…”

-Saku is taken aback

“Are you calling me stupid?!”

“You catch on fast for an idiot…”

“Grr! Got to hell you smart b*****d!!”

-Saku throws a punch at Kim Ji-Hoon

-Ji-Hoon is prepared and catches her fist

-Saku tries to pull back but can’t

-Ji-Hoon smiles

-Saku freezes for a moment, and then she gets back to her senses

“Let go of me…”

“Apologize for trying to hit me.”

“Make me!”

-Kim Ji-Hoon yanks her forward

-Saku yelps and pushes herself back

“Why should I apologize to you when you won’t do it yourself?”

-Saku kicks his leg

-Ji-Hoon release her hand from the pain

“Ouch!! Why you-“

-Kim Ji-Hoon flicks Saku on the side of her head, hard

“Ai!! Hey!!”

-Amai steps in and grabs Ji-Hoon’s hand

“I’m sorry, but we have to go!”

-Amai shoves the band in the direction of the hangout

-Saku calls to him

“This isn’t over Kim Ji-Hoon!”

-Everyone begins to split and go home

-Hiai comes forward

“Did you have to?”

-Saku looks at her watch

“I have to work… but don’t worry; I’ll get that a*s to apologize to you for sure!”



© 2012 Japanese Cherry


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I dont know who I love more Ji-Hoon or Saku!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Japanese Cherry

11 Years Ago

U should love them both =3
I enjoyed the chapter
You are really good at this book
100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


Japanese Cherry

12 Years Ago

thank you!

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Added on July 25, 2012
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