The Hidden Goddess

The one. The one that makes you super happy and loves your company and make you love yourself. This is for her.

The Hidden Goddess

You are sitting there

One hand on face, looking pretty

Your pretty lips and flattering hair

My heart calls out to you, 'Oh Sweetie!'

Did any guy test his luck?

I know they did, who would not!?

Your gentle grace hit me like a truck

That you fell for me in the end, I never thought

You're a goddess. Wait, more than that

Petty words cannot describe you 

You're more than art, a master craft

My love, like words for you just grew

You're amazing and witty

And you're funny and more than perfect

I'm crazy and gritty

With some humor in retrospect

When I see you, my heart thumps

Words flow like a cascading waterfall

My skull numbs, I go ba-dum

Cause you're fated to be mine after all

You're the Yin to my Yang

With you in tow, it is clear

We are one, we are a gang

For I have nothing to fear while you are here

Reviews

[Celie Rose]

Beautiful poem. Love this stanza. "You're a goddess. Wait, more than that
Petty words cannot describe you. You're more than art, a master craft."
Well expressed and written.

[Chartheteacher]

Beautiful. You seem to say that if she were not already real, you would create her just as she is now. True love and adoration is a rare find these days! I love the line 'words flow like a cascading waterfall'.

[Carolynn]

Well if you found your Yin - bravo! Hang on tight and cherish her forever - this was a very beautiful poem!

[TheMalady]

Just make this one as a song or did you already made it? I love the last stanza of your poem:

You're the Yin to my Yang
With you in tow, it is clear
We are one, we are a gang
For I have nothing to fear while you are here

This is my favorite. I don't have anything to critic here. As usual, your poems are really great. Just a way of expressing one's passion and emotions. Good job! :)

[Elle Alley]

I love the passion and the enthusiasm that is reflected in this work. Great!

[Tiffany K Charles]

what a stanza........ wonderful work.....

[Amber Lily]

When I read this in my head it came out in a rather excited voice. Almost like a child jumping up and down from receiving an amazing present. That is how adorable this is. When you want to tell somebody how great they are but you just can't keep it all in, and yet cannot put in all in one sentence. Very nice :)

[Emily]

Awesome first stanza!
Keep it up!!

[BThomvanWart]

This is such an adorable poem! I like that it's whimsical, but that adds a depth to it that being straight up romantic wouldn't have. Anyone who becomes a writer's muse would be flattered to receive such a well thought out, romantic piece! Keep up the good work! :)

[Lola Nad]

this is a really cute and romantic poem. Well done!