Molly

A tribute to Molly

Molly

Oh sweet Molly, you were always there

You'd follow Ellen everywhere

You are her rock and her support

You are the guardian to her mental fort

You little adorable girl, you were always happy

Never complained, and took it all on the face

Thinking back, it is very unfair what's happening to you

You the epitome of love do not deserve the pain 

It'd hard to understand your pain, believe me when I say

All day and all night I pray

In the end, there is one thing I can say

It is that you do not deserve to be taken away

Please don't go, don't you see,

How hard and painful it is?

Look at Ellen, her eyes are red 

And her soul cannot help but shake

I know it is selfish, but please just stay

It feels just like yesterday

The first time you went home

They looked at you as you would play and roam

In their house and in their hearts

You are a masterpiece of art

Fuzzy, lovable and full of life

The pain should not be yours, it is ours

Alex, Kevin, Brett and Bethany

Mr. Kolman, Tim, Melissa and little Kynni

All wish this is a bad dream

As tears fall from their eyes like a stream

But somethings are just meant to be

We have no choice but to accept this

Even if you leave, you'll never leave our hearts

We love you Molly, from the bottom of our hearts

Reviews

[Ellen Kolman]

Sage! I am speechless ... I am completely overcome and overwhelmed...this is perhaps the most thoughtful and wonderful gift I have ever received...you have completely captured our feelings about our dear Molly...thank you! I mean Thank you very very much!!! HUGS!!!

[Sage]

You're welcome Ellen. You deserved this :)

[Ellen Kolman]

HUGS and much love to you

[θεά]

This is so endearing and personal. The affection and emotion felt by the writer for Molly is so palpable. And so very touching. Beautifully put together.

[Ellen Kolman]

I am really missing Molly lately ... thank you again for your beautiful tribute sage...hugs!

[Lola Nad]

Losing a friend (be it a human friend or a 'furry friend') is about the worst kind of pain one can experience. It never leaves you. You captured it perfectly.

[Mary Helda]

Jeez...this is very sad and heartbreaking,,,,i cant help but feel sad,you brought out the emotions in a fantastic way...this piece is truely amazing

[Arghya Samaddar]

Your poems are very affectionate , and this one is no different

[Emily]

I loved it!!
Very well written!
Keep it up!

[Efflorescence Honey]

Awe, what a pretty poem. :) I lost my four legged friend not too long ago, but I'm not sad about it. In fact, some of our funny lil moments together I can still remember and laugh at♡ Anywho, 100/100

[Tiffany K Charles]

I wish i knew Molly.... I bet she would have loved me too...... you should think about writing poems for people for special occasions....

[Sage]

I bet she would've loved you! Ah, maybe I could write like that. Thanks for reading and for the suggestion.

[CiNtsaLis]

I really like the story, I only wished-- to know more behind it. Overall- full ratings "Sennin" *smiles* (Jiraiya?) ahaha's *covers face*

[Sage]

Well, Molly the dog was a cute little girl who always used to be surrounded by love. However one day, very unfairly she was diagnosed with cancer. So, poor Ellen who is a part of our WC community had to put her down. I wrote this verse as a tribute.
P.S I'd rather be Naruto. Jiraya's sennin mode isn't very good to look at! :P

[CiNtsaLis]

*GASP* How cuuuute

[Coyote Poetry]

Animals are our friends. They become part of the family. I'm sorry for the loss.
Coyote

[Sage]

Thank you, they are families indeed. They do not deserve bad stuff.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with your statement.