Pride

There's nothing to say,
I got ghosts of words, I have loads of those,
There's nothing to bleed,
Another way to say what I have already preached,
I'm making mistakes, afraid of what I make,
The pain I make and the hurting I don't feel,
There's a need to bleed,
On pages
For you to see, 'cause that's when I truly feel real.

Reviews

[kenza salmi]

I do want to say that you are a Great poet !*

Keep on !

[Tom Fabian Cartwright]

Amazing! I'd have to agree with William Liston, definitely need a name change...

[Virtual Phun]

I'm really glad you like it! Thank you for reviewing. :)

[William Liston]

This is very well written. I think you should consider a name change.

-William Liston

[Virtual Phun]

Thank you. That means a lot. :)

The name helps deflating my pride.