Sultry Sensuality

Sultry Sensuality

A Poem by Samantha ~virginpoet

I released
a sigh that spoke
of artistic creation

As I divided
my thighs
yielding
the source
of existence

Lust
laced
luscious
lyrical
thickness

In perpendicular poses
re-birthed in Kama Sutra

I make them moan
in masculine tones

C a u s e

I'm on my
hands and knees
as I write

Erotica cums
from inside my
 
Ink well

And

I leave them
coveting
craving
collaborations

Cause

I feed
their wounded
soul minerals

of

Torrid temperatures
sultry enough to
resuscitate stars

On the verge
of becoming
black dwarfs

Cause

I divided
my thighs
yielding
the source
of existence


By Samantha Campbell

© 2012 Samantha ~virginpoet


Author's Note

Samantha ~virginpoet
I dont like the title and I hate to leave anything untitled so Im stuck with sultry please does anyone wanna re name this

update... I dreamed of a title so Ive changed it to "Sultry Sensuality"

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I think this is my favourite of your poems, darling. You are a master of all that is sexy and beautiful, Samantha baby

Posted 11 Years Ago


Samantha ~virginpoet

11 Years Ago

much thanks
The image of the divided thighs linked to the birth of ideas and words is striking here... bringing forth erotic cum... Clever and spicy

Posted 12 Years Ago


I divided
my thighs
yielding
the source
of existence

That's a one of a kind finish to another excellent poem. Great job Samantha.

Posted 12 Years Ago


nsfw! i found myself blushing as i read this. two thumbs way up!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Indeed the feeling a heat trancends the page!

Posted 12 Years Ago


i love it so erotic :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


"Lust
laced
luscious
lyrical
thickness"
I like your use of words and thoughts. Always a pleasure to read your words. I like the description i the poem. I had to read a few times to enjoy your thoughts and desires. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hmmm, Something is missing but I cannot put my finger on what exactly. Your vocabulary/word choice/diction was great. Your complete the thought but I want more because the last stanza is not a good closing one. It doesn;t leave the reader with anything to think about. I am a HUGE fan of your writing but I am not impressed by this one. Keep writing :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


I've read your other poems and I liked them. I don't like this, however. I can;t explain why, but it seems to be missing something your other poetry has. If i think of what that something is, I'll message you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Yielding to Comprehension would be a good title here.

Interestingly written. I am a very big fan of punctuation so I found myself searching for your voice in this. I have said it on other pieces and I will say it here, I would love to hear this from your lips to hear what the words are supposed to sound like and where your breath catches.

Overall a good piece.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago



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