Origami Words

She released a sigh
that spoke of artistic creation

As she found words
etched in scratch marks
across stained pages

That she folded into
perfect origami birds
with blue colored wings
then tossed the sheets
into the wind so that the
world could hear her
thoughts sing

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

you have to read http://www.writerscafe.org/eglatine "Origami"
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/eglatine/974516/

its as if I wrote this as a reply or something its kinda freaking me out I never read her poem till today and its like were on the same folded page like a sickness thick with words

Reviews

[Danielle]

Very nice and quite different from your other work. Lovely!!!

[Jonathan]

Very subtle yet very fresh like sleeping naked on a hot summer night and feeling that rare cool breezes pass through you.

[Who Cares]

I love this piece. Nice job.

[Little Birdie]

Very light and breezy. Pain handled in a different, resolving way. Liberating even. Great work.

[Perfect Mistake]

Beautifully written. Good work :3

[A Lost Man Found]

i love this. awesome. keep it up.

[words of rooted design]

This is marvelous

[eglantine]

wooooaaaah lol This is too weird, we are somehow connected!!!

[w]

beautiful imagery.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the ending to this poem. Releasing the paper into the breeze. Good description allow me to feel and see the desire of your powerful words. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote