We Poets are 21st Century Prophets filling up notebooks and screaming on stages
We connect in a fashion
as we wear words
We dance on pages stripping naked
to get you to listen
like what we have to say
can be heard better by eyes
but only 4% of the public
suffers with Sinestesia
And still we slash our wrists with ballpoint pens to get our souls heard
Hanging our pain like paintings in an art exhibit entitled "Emotional Poets"
Wanting Waiting Wishing for an Art Critic to tare us apart
Letter by letter word for word
Because...
Because we are so tightly put together
That we love to be torn apart
We turn the pain into art and scars into deeply embedded ink wells
Don't you see?
We 21st Century Prophets hold the keys to our broken heart cages by wielding pens in ways that spark thought
Cant you see?
Our wrists are still tender yet we slash them open again and again because...
Because writers block is a far far worse form of torture
"And still we slash
our wrists with ballpoint pens
to get our souls heard"
This says it all! We are poets and you have captured our essence with your wonderful words. Yes, we NEED to express ourselves and we want to be read...to touch other lives and to reach out across the world. So emotive and very powerful. Great work. Lydi**
Posted 10 Years Ago
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Wow, this is simply amazing Samantha. I am speechless. I love this. The title, the different font sizes, and the message behind the poem all caught my attention. I only found one mistake unless it was meant that way: Wanting
Waiting
Wishing
for an
Art Critic
to tare (**tear)
us apart
~Added to my favorites~
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Much thanks and Tare and Tear can be spelled either way I prefer tare as into tare apart cause to me.. read moreMuch thanks and Tare and Tear can be spelled either way I prefer tare as into tare apart cause to me tear is as to cry
The thing about a great poet is they expose their deepest thoughts, scariest fears and most fragile emotions so that they can show readers that they are not alone in being vulnerable and imperfect. I absolutely love this poem.
Reading this a year later still feels fresh and full of vigor!
You ooze the blood of a Poet!
There is no denying that each word screams to be heard....
The emotional tornado an artist holds within must be set free or else we die inside....
what's worse?... words die...
This is perfect... (sorry, no rip at this). putting our emotions down in full view or in riddles seems to be the only way to constructively let the beast roam free... telling truths most likely best left untold to the masses, though Ive never been afraid of the truth, and never been afraid to lie... I must say, truth is this is a pen of perfection.
I only ran across your work by chance having read Stevo's, but how lucky that was! This shows every bit as much of a gift. Aptly worded and wonderfully rhythmic. It simply blows me away.
I ask myself this question too. Do we write to be read or to purge our souls? Is the glory in delivering the words or in knowing their effect?
I guess a little bit of everything at given times. Truth is seldom one dimensional, or even three dimensional. Truth has its own black hole of irresistible gravity. Poets are the ones who have seen the event horizon of this enigma... A sharing of experience.
Write on! Great poetry.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thanks and wow I love "Truth has its own black hole of irresistible gravity. Poets are the ones who .. read moreThanks and wow I love "Truth has its own black hole of irresistible gravity. Poets are the ones who have seen the event horizon of this enigma" very wise words and a truth you could very well turn into a poem and I think you should use that line and expand on it and that idea would make a great poem
We ( 21st Century Prophets) are so passionate about expressing our thoughts and emotions. some of those are best done with pen and paper lol. this was great really loved it!
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