We Poets are 21st Century Prophets filling up notebooks and screaming on stages
We connect in a fashion
as we wear words
We dance on pages stripping naked
to get you to listen
like what we have to say
can be heard better by eyes
but only 4% of the public
suffers with Sinestesia
And still we slash our wrists with ballpoint pens to get our souls heard
Hanging our pain like paintings in an art exhibit entitled "Emotional Poets"
Wanting Waiting Wishing for an Art Critic to tare us apart
Letter by letter word for word
Because...
Because we are so tightly put together
That we love to be torn apart
We turn the pain into art and scars into deeply embedded ink wells
Don't you see?
We 21st Century Prophets hold the keys to our broken heart cages by wielding pens in ways that spark thought
Cant you see?
Our wrists are still tender yet we slash them open again and again because...
Because writers block is a far far worse form of torture
"And still we slash
our wrists with ballpoint pens
to get our souls heard"
This says it all! We are poets and you have captured our essence with your wonderful words. Yes, we NEED to express ourselves and we want to be read...to touch other lives and to reach out across the world. So emotive and very powerful. Great work. Lydi**
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This comment has been deleted by the website administrators.
We are bearing of our souls with every word we pen.
To not be read gives meaning that our souls matter not.
And it is, at that moment, that we feel truly alone.
Lost.
Loving the sentiment here. So true. Some of the writing is a little too obvious but it still manages to be powerful and evoke exactly what I assume you're going for. I might do another draft just to tighten some things up, but I liked it.
I really like it. I agree, us writers/artists, tend to ask for pain because without it, we have no inspiration. There is a reason why artists are so sensitive and most are troubles souls. I believe you really showcased that here. I love these lines:
Our wrists are still tender
yet we slash them open
again and again because...
Because writers block
is a far far worse
form of torture
Very, very interesting ! I see the influence of Victor Hugo :) The idea of poets being prophets has been written down in one of his great poems. The focus on the sensibility of the poets, again same inspiration ! XD Victor Hugo said "poet, tu es une femme" (= poet, you are a woman).
The end, instead, brought me back to latin literature, Oratio in a great poem of his expressed the same issue, even if from a different perspective. Poems, were for him, a part of him that would outlive his biological life (non omnia moriar = not completely I will die) and that will last longer than "the pyramids of Egypt".
Great poem, great topics, thank you for making me remember the happy time I spent studying literatures :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you for that bit of knowledge. I did not know that, It's very interesting. I write free verse .. read moreThank you for that bit of knowledge. I did not know that, It's very interesting. I write free verse I don't try to conform to any style. I try to have my own, No clue if I have succeeded in that lol. But like Oratio I hope my poems way out live me and "not completely I will die" Perhaps one day I will know the style in which I write
Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem it's greatly appreciated
HAD MY BABY BOY 12/29/2013 at 10:57 he weighs 8 pounds 4oz 19 in long
I am married to a fellow poet on this site http://www.writerscafe.org/itz_JuggZ aka Stevo The Poe-t
I cant sleep without kno.. more..