We Poets are 21st Century Prophets filling up notebooks and screaming on stages
We connect in a fashion
as we wear words
We dance on pages stripping naked
to get you to listen
like what we have to say
can be heard better by eyes
but only 4% of the public
suffers with Sinestesia
And still we slash our wrists with ballpoint pens to get our souls heard
Hanging our pain like paintings in an art exhibit entitled "Emotional Poets"
Wanting Waiting Wishing for an Art Critic to tare us apart
Letter by letter word for word
Because...
Because we are so tightly put together
That we love to be torn apart
We turn the pain into art and scars into deeply embedded ink wells
Don't you see?
We 21st Century Prophets hold the keys to our broken heart cages by wielding pens in ways that spark thought
Cant you see?
Our wrists are still tender yet we slash them open again and again because...
Because writers block is a far far worse form of torture
"And still we slash
our wrists with ballpoint pens
to get our souls heard"
This says it all! We are poets and you have captured our essence with your wonderful words. Yes, we NEED to express ourselves and we want to be read...to touch other lives and to reach out across the world. So emotive and very powerful. Great work. Lydi**
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All poets are driven. It seems not to matter how the lines are received, still we write.
I have been writing poetry since I was eight, I don't expect I will ever stop.
How wondrously urgent and futuristic a write, Samantha. 21st technology has absorbed the minds of the man in the street; the need to wake up from our collective slumber to be rushed and crushed by life pulsing just beneath the surface if we could see and sense the pain inside the loss of our mortality, the loss of our innocence, the cries of heart, body and mind to be heard and heeded before it is too late.
I adore your CRY to stay alive . . . in and through the ART of POETRY so masterly penned by you!
You have always been one that has stood out from the rest Samantha. I always love your verse. Always powerful and brash and grabs you from start to finish. Magnificent my dear.
There it is ladies and gentlemen the one thing that society hasnt done yet awoken to the minds viewpoint on the way things are now-a-days. Very insporational sorry if i spelt it wrong but sadly society will never wake up from it dull and boring way of being because people tend to not think that words, and ideas are the only things that make it anywhere in the world. Ive talked about waiting and wanting to start an intellectual revolution where people within our society tend to wake up and realize things for ones self. This poem has changed my life and now has made me more driven to write. Thank you. Mind reviewing my work Phantom: The Darkness Within and telling me what you think?
Writer's block is a myth, but to the extent that it might or could've occur, it could be such a b***h whenever it pesters on your muse. I like the rawness in your language, don't ever lose that though you are improving as you go along writing more poems; it is your Neptune's trident as a writer and you're fantastic that way...
Creative, and I dig the word play and the font. This is the second poem I've come across today that I found using the various fonts at our disposal in a artful way. I've used this medium/technique before and understand the usefulness of it. "Because we are so tightly put together That we love to be torn apart".... That hit home/ I think anybody who creates art ...can feel this. And that last stanza, was sublime.
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