We Poets are 21st Century Prophets filling up notebooks and screaming on stages
We connect in a fashion
as we wear words
We dance on pages stripping naked
to get you to listen
like what we have to say
can be heard better by eyes
but only 4% of the public
suffers with Sinestesia
And still we slash our wrists with ballpoint pens to get our souls heard
Hanging our pain like paintings in an art exhibit entitled "Emotional Poets"
Wanting Waiting Wishing for an Art Critic to tare us apart
Letter by letter word for word
Because...
Because we are so tightly put together
That we love to be torn apart
We turn the pain into art and scars into deeply embedded ink wells
Don't you see?
We 21st Century Prophets hold the keys to our broken heart cages by wielding pens in ways that spark thought
Cant you see?
Our wrists are still tender yet we slash them open again and again because...
Because writers block is a far far worse form of torture
"And still we slash
our wrists with ballpoint pens
to get our souls heard"
This says it all! We are poets and you have captured our essence with your wonderful words. Yes, we NEED to express ourselves and we want to be read...to touch other lives and to reach out across the world. So emotive and very powerful. Great work. Lydi**
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if only poets were looked on with the reverence of prophets, as they should be. bleeding your wisdom and feelings onto the page. painting a picture for us all to feel, using yourself to free our emotions, vicariously.
writers are the powerful
A very interesting supposition put forth eloquently. I don't pretend to lay claim to any psychic or prohetic powers however such as the seers of old. I am merely an observer of my surroundings and of human nature, striving to assemble some sort of clarity from the kaleidoscope of images which daily bombard my mind and heart. I enjoyed the read very much though. It was an intriguing and thought provoking write.
Why I feel that this could be one of the best pieces put up on Writerscafe for me.
1. The title, 21'st century prophets, just reading the title struck my curiosity, it's a great and very creatively edged way of drawing readers in.
2. Artist try to get their message delivered in so many different ways, visually, basically through all the senses. At the end of the day what they're trying to reach out to is the admirers mind, through all their efforts. You've explained this concept beautifully.
3. You've explained the sources of our inspiration, I say our because I'm a striving artist and reading this I feel this poem speaks for all of us trying to express ourselves. That's the beauty of this piece, it's like an anthem that unites our intellect and conveys are thoughts.
4. The ending is so true, nothing hurts more than having your work looked over, having your visions and dreams set to paper and then ignored. I'm a new face to WC and writing in general, joined about 2 weeks ago. These passed two weeks, i've been inspired to write more, felt support from all my fellow writers on here and feel appreciated. I can't help but log into the site every half an hour to an hour to see if someone said something about my work, or to read someone beautiful work. This was a great write, that inspires and speaks with such honesty and realism.
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