Virgin Poet

written in a third-person narrative

Welcome to her
pleasure dome
 
Venus vixen
born in
weightless
freeness

Right on the cusp
of the Universes
poetry apex

Neuroacoustic

Enchanting
afrobeat

Easily
dominating
bones

God

She wants to hear
the soul dance

Still listening from hips
a mute hearing with hands
an improper metaphor

Still she
performs her
virgin lullaby
serpentine
slithers
as articles
of clothing
shimmy
down
velvet
pores

Spilling out of
cotton fibers
seduction
has became
the fabric
of her life

Her salacious
speech so refined
erotica's mistress
divine artistry
technique
contortionist
meets home grown
voodoo love child
She speaks in tongues
so saith the Maiden Fair
born beneath the belief
she could cast spells
with her lips

See she saw you
your shade something
like poetry

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

CGACC-WNT5Y-P9Y71

Neuroacoustic ... is a combination of ....

(NEUROLOGIC) ... The logic of the nervous system; how the imprint circuits process information

and (ACOUSTIC) ... Relating to sound or the sense of hearing

Afrobeat ... is a combination of American jazz, funk and Nigerian beat. It was created by Africa’s most outspoken artist, the late Fela Ransome Anikulapo of Nigeria in the early 70s at the time British rock and American soul music was dominating most of Africa’s music scene.

Apex ... Reach a high point or climax melodic lines build up to the chorus and it apexes at the solo

I cut out the last stanza cause I felt that it was stronger ending it as posted but you tell me should I leave it as is or change it back to ending with .....

I can now stand
before you freely
and let my voice be heard
dancing to my
own beat

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

It reeks of class, grabds the reader and refuses to let go, well done, good read.

[Octob3r Star]

So different from other writing styles. I always find it curious and wonder what the writer is thinking when they write like this. Thanks for the post. Cheers :)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

i love the last stanza

[Tamia123]

I loved it! Sweet and sexy at the same time. Always love your writing :) Good job!

[Richard Layne]

very good
i like the current ending much better

[Geraldine]

I'm speechless with this. ^^ Job well done.

[André-J-Franklin]

When i was reading this i was like what do some of these words mean. Then i got down farther and notice the word bank with there definitions. I learn a new word today and the history behind it thank you! That and your poem was enjoyable to read.

[Who Cares]

Great flow and I like the idea, you included a word you made up. I like that, it shows a unique writing style as well as creativity. I like how it is posted now, it leaves the reader with a more powerful message as postred than if you were to add the last stanza. I love your writing style.

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of thoughts and I like the visions create by this poem. I believe woman can control their world if they desire.
"Her salacious
speech so refined
erotica's mistress
divine artistry
technique
contortionist
meets home grown
voodoo love child"
No weakness in the excellent poem.
Coyote

[AK]

Really nice poem!