Virgin Poet

written in a third-person narrative

Welcome to her
pleasure dome
 
Venus vixen
born in
weightless
freeness

Right on the cusp
of the Universes
poetry apex

Neuroacoustic

Enchanting
afrobeat

Easily
dominating
bones

God

She wants to hear
the soul dance

Still listening from hips
a mute hearing with hands
an improper metaphor

Still she
performs her
virgin lullaby
serpentine
slithers
as articles
of clothing
shimmy
down
velvet
pores

Spilling out of
cotton fibers
seduction
has became
the fabric
of her life

Her salacious
speech so refined
erotica's mistress
divine artistry
technique
contortionist
meets home grown
voodoo love child
She speaks in tongues
so saith the Maiden Fair
born beneath the belief
she could cast spells
with her lips

See she saw you
your shade something
like poetry

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

CGACC-WNT5Y-P9Y71

Neuroacoustic ... is a combination of ....

(NEUROLOGIC) ... The logic of the nervous system; how the imprint circuits process information

and (ACOUSTIC) ... Relating to sound or the sense of hearing

Afrobeat ... is a combination of American jazz, funk and Nigerian beat. It was created by Africa’s most outspoken artist, the late Fela Ransome Anikulapo of Nigeria in the early 70s at the time British rock and American soul music was dominating most of Africa’s music scene.

Apex ... Reach a high point or climax melodic lines build up to the chorus and it apexes at the solo

I cut out the last stanza cause I felt that it was stronger ending it as posted but you tell me should I leave it as is or change it back to ending with .....

I can now stand
before you freely
and let my voice be heard
dancing to my
own beat

Reviews

[NYLiteraryMagazine]

Your poems are truly wonderful!

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[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

I like the ending that you have. It leaves it with a bit of a mystery as what will be with this "you" . Your work is wonderful, inventive and easy to relate to.

[Kenneth The Poet]

One hell of a good piece, Sam.

[Aly Jones]

Whoa. Love the detail you used during this entire piece. It made the words really come alive.

[freelancejouster]

there's a certain feel to this that just resonates. you've accomplished what you set out to create and i'm fascinated.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

A wonderful third-person narrative, poetically creative piece into the mind of you. Nicely done.

~Anna Rose

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

This is such an amazing poem! I love it a lot.

[TawnyBlueStar]

Beautiful :D
nice flow and creativity ^^
great poem :)

[PJ]

F*****g amazing