This Night

something short

I’m dressed for
the emotion of this night

I peeled back my virgin flesh

To let you watch me bleed

As I lay my soul bare

I cut me open

and words spill

By Samantha Campbell

Reviews

[freelancejouster]

i feel like this could have been taken a lot farther and written a lot more strongly than it is. it's not necessarily missing something and not really too short... it just fell flat.

[Geraldine]

Nicely written. ^^

[Missy Moooooo]

Wow.

[ur_ginger_girl]

wow just wow

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

Wow this is beautiful, such emotion.

[Tasha]

Very nicely written Samantha.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

the last line is so cool!

[joshua deathdealer]

Nicely composed.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

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