This Night

something short

I’m dressed for
the emotion of this night

I peeled back my virgin flesh

To let you watch me bleed

As I lay my soul bare

I cut me open

and words spill

By Samantha Campbell

Reviews

[Aristede Craig Jr]

damm you do it so well

[Honey54]

OOOH I LIKE THIS...SOUL BARING...AMAZING..WE ALL BARE SO MUCH IN OUR POETRY...IM GLAD YOU SHARED A LITTLE PIECE OF YOUR SELF...NICE JOB !!

[Blindfolded]

Nicely written, quite powerful.

[Octob3r Star]

... and then? I want more! cheers

[Enigma]

Short and intense. Emotionally charged piece accompanied with a good use of metaphor and imagery. Keep it up.

[Who Cares]

Short but meaningful, I completely understand what you were going for. Nice job

[PossiblyAlice]

i wasn't sure what was going on but then i got it and it blew me away, i love it

[ShameemAkhtar]

Strong, shocking, graphic...

Makes the heart beat accelerate.

Stunning. You counted a thousand stories in these few lines..

Stunnnning

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Short and sweet, but powerful lines. Loved this, nicely done!

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and beautiful words create visions. You said a lot in this short poem. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote