Pen Savage

I got so caught up
in his erotic flow
his poetic mojo

That I allowed
myself to be
poetically
caressed
by words

Wet my
Lips

Lick my
fingers

Page one
 was so erotic

That I'm

Tempted

To peek at
page two

Constantly thinking
 
How could I
get wetter
than I
already
am

How could I
rub my fingers
across my
c**t

In a better
way than this

Then you
show me

Not thru
spoken words
but thru
erotic
poetry

Shaking
and
vibrating

~GUSH~

I exhale
a sense
of pleasure
so gently

But I'm still
so turned on
by the fact that
you cum to me

You placed
your hands into
an alternate reality

Palms stained
a deep indigo blue

By your
expression
I could see
the orgasm

On my page 
as your pen bursts
all over my verse

Probably was
the thought
of my tongue
moving in
gentle
stokes

Your moans
make sweet music
with every note

Pen savage
cause you gave me
 lyrical penetration

As we're f*****g
raw and hard
I spit
to the
beat
 of your
heart
 
Watched as you
spit seamen flow

Words came like Pac Man
cause I'm eatin you up

Hallow pen
liquid echo's

I Kiss your
sweet spot
and watch
you grow
harder

As I reached
the end
of page
one

So I hope
to get to
page two

and

Watch me
express to you
all of the things
I would love
to do to you

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

this is like a give and take ... about someones erotic poetry and my own erotic work and the pleasure received and taken

dont know how else to describe it lol

Reviews

[melissa]

hot!

[Scott Lee]

Excuse me while i go the bathroom.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

lol

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

Another great one. Your creativity and lust for words is amazing!

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Dirty in a good way, and erotic. Loved this intriging piece!


100/100

[Alex Vidmar]

I always love your works! Very well done! your ability to create such erotic imagery is absolutely stunning! please keep me posted on your poems and stories!

~Alex

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for the erotic dance of words and emotion. Few can make the words feel alive and good. You can. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[freelancejouster]

i don't like that you use poetic twice in the first two stanzas and then not at all. it just feels a bit off. the rest is quite wonderfully filthy. you are so talented at the naughty stuff.

[lei]

just perfect!

[AK]

Wonderful write!

[johnnyqueer]

Quite filthy, I loved it.