Poetic Pulse

short poem

Digging beneath flesh
to find the souls scroll

Words linger forever

Ive traveled past the nebula
into the ocean of God

I have evolved
found something
that is worth all of this

So until you can feel it

Just remain
under the surface

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

be sure to look at my main pic adds more to the poem

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Reviews

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Thought-provoking, nicely written piece. Words have the power to cut us to the core with any emotion. Loved this one.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed this poem. I like when you open the door to thoughts. You are a talented writer. Can write in all direction with balance and skill. Artwork and words did make my old mind think. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Alex Vidmar]

I like this one. Not bad. You have done better though, I have to be honest with you.

[writing mojo]

I detect ambiance in the written pulse, that of a stranger in the awake of discovering self in more than involved evolved thoughts...good stuff

[AK]

Wow! Simply wow..

[WhiteWillow]

I love short, powerful poems that give the reader a lot to think about. Like this one.

[freelancejouster]

i really like the flow and the organization of this, it adds so much to the entirety. you've created a wonderful image. i really enjoyed the vocabulary and the line "traveled past the nebula".
can i mention punctuation again? i just feel that if there was a way to pause when needed that it would read so much more easily and add so much.

[DalainaRenee]

Very short but it quickly begins a picture in your mind! Good poem!!

[Jordan's Back]

now this sounds so lyrical it could be in a Rock Piece

[Tamia123]

There is a very dark undertone and i love it! Your an amazing writer :) Good job!