Wet Dream

minimalist poem

When
Emotions
Get Wet
Dreams
Will Cry

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

A complex metaphor and double entendre

Not sure about the title ... Any ideas?

I had a dream last night and I woke up saying this ... cant remember the whole dream but it was a very nice dream a very wet dream lol I came 3 times ;) Blushes sorry if that was to much info haha

Reviews

[Alex Vidmar]

This is definitely interesting... But it's very profound all the same. Well done.

~Alex

[Hiddenfire]

perfect use of juxtaposition and phrasing in general. I actually think the title you used is perfect because it gives that extra layer of sensuality going right into the poem.

[patricia]

This seems like sublimation to me. kinda like suppressing memories by acting out. But there again, I am just a pretty messed up person, and other people probably have just very normal drives. I am glad it was a nice dream for you, but personally I prefer to let sleeping dogs lie. Thanks Samantha only you could conjure up so much thought from so few lines.

[A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv]

LOL, i wish i had dreams like that :P
Great poem!!!!

[Lily Mae]

I agree, it's short yet powerful ..x

[Jordan's Back]

This is so awesome :)

[Revery]

Nice, I like that there is so much in so few words.

[Coyote Poetry]

I could use a few good dreams. A interesting poem. Create a lot to ponder in your seven words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Richard Layne]

3 times!
i think the title then definitely works--maybe even Very wet dream.

[Philip Smith]

Passion