Wet Dream

minimalist poem

When
Emotions
Get Wet
Dreams
Will Cry

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

A complex metaphor and double entendre

Not sure about the title ... Any ideas?

I had a dream last night and I woke up saying this ... cant remember the whole dream but it was a very nice dream a very wet dream lol I came 3 times ;) Blushes sorry if that was to much info haha

Reviews

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Interesting write. Nicely done.

[Distant horizons]

:-)
I used to write minimalist thoughts called the 12 words or less remix. You win. :-)

[Wicked Jester]

Sometimes less is more, as is the case here.

the title you have chosen suits this well

[Daniel Atkinson]

Loved the simplicity. :)

[ATG]

A very short, but interesting poem.

[Jibey]

This had a pleasing flow about it *grins*

[Chris Yip]

Something physical as a result of something emotional or vice versa. Less is more!!

[Kenneth The Poet]

I am unsure, but I love the imagery.

[Manda]

sensually minimalist that was thought provoking and fun...excellent work :)

[Chris]

just three?... pity...

A title bears closer examination of the dream.