staccato - is a form of musical articulation signifying an unconnected note which is short and detached It has been used in musical notation since the early 18th century Staccato is the Italian word meaning "detached"
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I dont like the title I may change it yet again lol any suggestions?
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I love the title for it compels the reader and then the poem? Woahhh!!! lol
Fabulous piece of work love, truly is...I admire your stream of thoughts...all is painted in excellent tones and so real! I can literally dive into your work!
Excellent!
xoxo
As sooften, you combine the language of poetry with the language of sensual pleasure, your arousal is your inspiration, your loemaking is your writing, your climax is the climax of your drama...
... how pleasing it would be to sow the seeds within the womb of your mind that would give birth to more...to be the one whose pen thrusts between your thighs..
This is magnificent Samantha!! I love just how emotive and moving your pieces always are! And there is such a range of feeling from such a moderately lengthy piece! You've really taken me on an adventure- the Scripted Sorceress was a journey to behold!
Loved this parts:
"Still believing
in fairy tales
and living boldly
to the beat of
my inner song"
"But always holding
in the evidence of that scar
the need for the forgiveness
in order to not press repeat ..."
There is so much effortless perfection oozing from your pen...i'd be terribly sad if it were ever capped!
the length of this is off-putting, though it's mostly from the way it's arranged i expect. i like the first few stanzas, i've been in that position and it's empowering and terrifying at the same time. the way you described it was apt and wonderful. i thought you went to a weird place with the poem, but then... i liked it, so. nice work.
No weakness in this poem. Felt like a scene where you were lucky and felt the thoughts and feelings of another person. Each set of lines added to the strength and the desire of this poem. Your words made me think and ponder many things. I believe each of us want to feel special and needed. To be treated as we are the only one. Thank you for the outstanding thoughts provoking poetry.
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