As I gaze upon this maze I find my tongue is tied, fingers fit to be tied in this tantalizing tangle of mind tingling type. These words yet soothe my throbbing brain via poetic pulse rendering my mind as to surrender in tranquility. Inspiring me to write poetry… this writer’s voice does speak to me, in utterances of phonetic print. Today I stumbled upon this maze, still in faze from yesterday’s.. so how would I bate my praise? Like this: Freak’n Excellent!
such inspiration to aspire creation in drenching flow, the word sex you quote, words upon words slips proverbial tongue behind lips spoken out through pen and paper dripping your dream language slow; some say angels will use it to coax the devil to stay home , say it in the obsession, your flirting in square peg circular to fit..only you and the heaven in mind you know..amazing stuff
How can one comment perfection? The lines are so sultry and dark and, in words of Fiona Apple, Slow Like Honey and Heavy With Mood :) in other words, attention capturing, mind blowing, beautiful work :)
Hmm.... I like this a lot. Very well written. Could easily hear this being done as either a metal song, (similar to Five Finger Death Punch's "Bad Company" or "Far From Home") and as a slow, heartfelt vocal piece.
Very nice with wonderful flow. I could relate too because I have been a DJ for the last twelve years. I also loved the kissing gestures articulated in other ways than usual, but directly related to your love of poetry. The concept of this is one of my favorites of yours. Interesting, has multiple meanings, and clearly moves emotions as feelings do with strong use of language.
You should get an award for this. Your very gifted when it comes to words and your passion is obvious and dripping like sweat from the forehead of your imagination. Sensual and deep. Erotic in heaps. Excellent poem.
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