As I gaze upon this maze I find my tongue is tied, fingers fit to be tied in this tantalizing tangle of mind tingling type. These words yet soothe my throbbing brain via poetic pulse rendering my mind as to surrender in tranquility. Inspiring me to write poetry… this writer’s voice does speak to me, in utterances of phonetic print. Today I stumbled upon this maze, still in faze from yesterday’s.. so how would I bate my praise? Like this: Freak’n Excellent!
S`funny, but the line "I can feel the skin of these
words," does little for me, but nearly everything
else in the poem is excitng.
I will just come and taste the good stuff and
leave the rest to the critics.
To me it is all good, but some is delicious.
Thank you,
----- John
The sound of this poem overall is great. The rhythm and word choice complement each other very well. I also enjoyed the imagery in this poem and how it changes fluidly. Very well written.
As I gaze upon this maze I find my tongue is tied, fingers fit to be tied in this tantalizing tangle of mind tingling type. These words yet soothe my throbbing brain via poetic pulse rendering my mind as to surrender in tranquility. Inspiring me to write poetry… this writer’s voice does speak to me, in utterances of phonetic print. Today I stumbled upon this maze, still in faze from yesterday’s.. so how would I bate my praise? Like this: Freak’n Excellent!
Some poems just beg to be read out loud and I think that this is one of them. I liked the way the rhythm of this piece would stop and start, at least how I read it, giving the poem a sort of back bone to lean on.
Your poetry is always a pleasure to read. You give life and a feel of sexiness to poetry. Need people who can make poetry exciting and erotic. You do. No weakness in this poem. I had to read the poem twice. A outstanding poem.
Coyote
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