Microcosm

short poem

The thoughts we have
are all lost to time

We move on as the
memories trail in yesterday

Cycling through emotional shades

Lost in the Microcosm
of a Galaxy

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

The small pic at the bottom just inspired this poem

I'd like to thank you in advance for reading my words and for any comments that you leave. Your time and reviews are greatly valued.
I appreciate your thoughts dearly, and I hope you enjoyed the read.

Reviews

[Sandra835]

I like this. It is short and sweet, but provokes a thought process that continues well after the read is over. Awesome!

[WhiteWillow]

A powerful piece, for sure. Love the last line, and could spend hours tossing that one around in my head! Simply wonderful.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Like the universe....in a nutshell. Great write!

~Anna Rose

[A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv]

Short and very enjoyed :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true. In the end. All of our thoughts and memories will be lost. I like the way you expressed the view and desire of the poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[patricia]

ah...the universe within. sometimes I think its a blessing to move on as memories trail, especially if the memory is a painful one. I kinda like being just a speck in all the vastness, but to be lost in the Microcosm...now that is a new idea. Thanks Samantha, I stared at the picture awhile, a kaleidescope image on very round shoulders. Bye for now.

[Shadows of Memories]

just wow! how could u bring upon the meaning just thru these 7 lines?? the biggest truth ever possibly and u flowed it down so easily and spontaneously. Too Good :)kp sharng

[Lily Mae]

A short read maybe but powerful.. and so true..x

[Richard Layne]

i saw some guy's exploding head in that pic ha ha. i read this as we are pretty small and inconsequential and we are in the grand scheme.

[Empirik]

Explosive! Seems like something experienced through celestial traveling in this world. With all the ups and downs of feelings and the power of a stars birth one can see. Nice