Microcosm

short poem

The thoughts we have
are all lost to time

We move on as the
memories trail in yesterday

Cycling through emotional shades

Lost in the Microcosm
of a Galaxy

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

The small pic at the bottom just inspired this poem

I'd like to thank you in advance for reading my words and for any comments that you leave. Your time and reviews are greatly valued.
I appreciate your thoughts dearly, and I hope you enjoyed the read.

Reviews

[symmetryAsymmetry]

But the microcosm has stonger gravity than entire galaxies...

A most intriguing poem...threw my mind into outer space... :-)

[Jack Isaac]

I had so many good ideas for a review as I read this and they all just slipped away as I read on... they just went off into some kind of.... ummm... microcosm! Fortunately my mind cycled back and I remembered, this one little review is but a drop in the ocean of WC, and yet it will always stand out in my memory. Nice bit of philosophy you've shown here. Thanks.

[Alex Vidmar]

Short, sweet and to the point.

[Katia]

I like that your poem is minimalistic. I also like that it makes me realize that I'm a small grain of sand preoccupied with things of minor importance. It somehow liberates me. Liked it. :)

[Kenneth The Poet]

An explosion of awesome.

[Mockingbird]

very thought-provoking. it makes me long for lost yesterdays.

[Chris Yip]

Short and sweet poem but speaks a thousand words from the heart & mind. Thank you for a good read and write.

[Little Birdie]

Beautiful. It's so easy to lose ourselves sometimes.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Perfectly constructed and rounded, very easy to read, whcih leads me to re-read again and again, a triumph in words.

[daydreamer]

good write. its so true our lives are so complicated just like the microcosm of galaxy:)