Articulation

Her thoughts twinkled like stars
she delighted in the sight
of the skies

If only her arms
were long enough
to reach them and had
the articulation
to speak them

Her pen could write
the notes of the universe

That gave her creations life

She could lasso heaven for you

She could make you forget
your troubled pulse

By Samantha Campbell

Reviews

[Jibey]

I like the idea of letting go and opening up...

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed, for one to prononuce in life will always lead to danger with gossip, well done, good read.

[Amila Jay]

A great write:-)

[writing mojo]

poetry is my mistress painted in the night you have written in with in this piece , a star for the perfect sentence and U.F.O sightings for the rest jumbled under a skirt of dawn, of my revised versions alienated in the distance between seeing her in more than meets the eye...amazing stuff

[Little Birdie]

Makes me feel a bit bound, thinking of my great capabilities as of a impossible fantasy. Nonetheless, a pretty, dreamy poem.

[Philip Smith]

"She could lasso heaven for you" Great line and makes me want to meet her one day

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

wonderfully written piece in reference to writing and poetry. Nicely done!

[Empirik]

Intergalactic introspective interest. I wonder what the stars would say through us. Would they speak your heart? Would they speak your mind? Would they speak your spirit? This is thoughtful. Nice!

[WhiteWillow]

A beautiful piece. Will definitely check out Trish's poem, thanks.

[Chris Yip]

Short and sweet poem about a poet who has the ability to write poetry! Nicely done and well balance poem. Well thought out and poetry in its true sense.