[random review] If you think bright blue stars are hot, then try this poem! -- I think it reaches nuclear fusion. Then I wonder, if a star is born, how was it conceived? Imagine the romances of the heavens! And then there was the Big Bang --ouch! So many metaphors, so little time. I'm so glad I took the time to review this, absolutely splendid!
Tori Amos: "No one f***s to a metronome." It would be a little nicer without the cursing. I've seen the word f**k on here so many times it's lost its meaning. I believe it has become one of the most overused words besides moon (Of which I am guilty of using) but besides all that, you have really done some nice sensual work here with some really nice phrases which have already been mentioned. It's clear you've been writing awhile and it shows. Don't hate me. Nice sensual poem.
The dream of delight flows through your imagination with a rapture that creates a heavenly bliss - a mind-f*****g that is as sweet, wet and deliciously slippery as the mango - that sadly slips out of the hand and onto the dirt below... But the moistened thighs provide sweet new refreshment, satisfying the lips of the imagination... whetting the appetite once more
Spellbinding! This is a mesmerizing piece of erotic art! You have done well! You took me on a journey into the galactic ecstasy of your Poetic Rapture...Nicely done Samantha!
Your poetry seem to get better with every poem and story. This poem open many good doors and the description allow the reader to fall in the beautiful words. I did like the ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
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