Desolation Heartache
A Poem by
Samantha ~virginpoet
The only presence of Love are the Fantasies Flowing from my Ink Beckoning Woes where newer flows tend to get Lost in the Sadness of Heartache Subscribing to the same script of how Lonely its gets after I get Wet Feeding the Needs of my P***y but I Forget and lead my Heart to the opening mouth of neglect Without hesitation
my Heart makes me feel
how she is so Melancholy
from being Quarantined Isolated in my chest behind poetic bars So Horny with Need Please Kiss me where supple thoughts reside Desire burning like Fire my Heart go up in Flames Remnants of ash remain While men say "I like the sound of your Tragedy in the rain" I poeticize my Hearts raptures Sharing sonnets and stanzas and dried up tear streams BUT Suffering too long in this desolation Loneliness If I could use my pen to transcribe what Passion really is for the world to see than maybe someday he'd see me By Samantha Campbell
© 2011 Samantha ~virginpoet
Author's Note
inspired after a conversation with Jibey
whew this made me cry
its more than a poem
it has a deeper meaning
Reviews
Beautiful powerful full of passion and wanton desire god this was just incredible!
I SEE YOU!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Hard to show real self. To give everything to another. We need to be sure. I like the desire and need in the poem. I know from experience. People who accept less pay the price for a long time. Words on paper are safe. Passion and desire can decrease with pain and hurt. No weakness in this poem. Just amazing poetry that open the door to thoughts. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote
Posted 12 Years Ago
Hard to show real self. To give everything to another. We need to be sure. I like the desire and need in the poem. I know from experience. People who accept less pay the price for a long time. Words on paper are safe. Passion and desire can decrease with pain and hurt. No weakness in this poem. Just amazing poetry that open the door to thoughts. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote
just made a template for this poem will post in my pics if anyone wants to see
Posted 13 Years Ago
just made a template for this poem will post in my pics if anyone wants to see
A poem full of longing really captures my attention. I can sense your strong emotions flowing in this one and I hope that the person you like will also long for your presence.
Posted 13 Years Ago
A poem full of longing really captures my attention. I can sense your strong emotions flowing in this one and I hope that the person you like will also long for your presence.
wow wow wow!!!!!!! is all I can say you've left me speechless and that's not an easy thing to do
youve left me teary
100/100
Posted 13 Years Ago
wow wow wow!!!!!!! is all I can say you've left me speechless and that's not an easy thing to do
youve left me teary
100/100
Nice I liked it Well done nice write
Posted 13 Years Ago
Nice I liked it Well done nice write
hot...a bit too hot for me in places, but patches of outstanding depth. Thankyou.
Posted 13 Years Ago
hot...a bit too hot for me in places, but patches of outstanding depth. Thankyou.
really like the first stanza. It really could stand on it's own as micro poetry.
Posted 13 Years Ago
really like the first stanza. It really could stand on it's own as micro poetry.
wow
this has such powerful meanings o.o
brings out a lot of inner feelings and your right, this shows that it is more than just a poem :D
'Sharing sonnets
and stanzas
and dried up
tear streams'
amazing :D
Posted 13 Years Ago
wow
this has such powerful meanings o.o
brings out a lot of inner feelings and your right, this shows that it is more than just a poem :D
'Sharing sonnets
and stanzas
and dried up
tear streams'
amazing :D
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