Poetic Thrusts

As my sweet lips spill
I can think of some quick s**t
spit some slick s**t

Speaking volumes
stretching silent breath
fill you up with words

Creating symmetrical
breaks and grooves
too exquisite to lose

Creating these sensations
spiraling deep inside of me
muse inspired poetic thrusts

((((Damn baby I hit your spot))))

Creating climax-tive images
cross the space between
meter and rhyme
physically dropping
insane rhythmic grinds

Stimulating verbs
tongue-gasmic serves
by strange borne
some spirits manifest
knowledge being born

Haters scorn
words spoken
thoughts provoked
by petty views
misconstrued
by uninspired views

Excuse me hater
but your point
of view isn't valid

I transform words
into lyrical art

Pen gyrating

I watch its glistening girth
grasping greatness 

Got you Intoxicated off my genius

You'll taste what I'm thinkin
ink spilled from my Honey-coated
inner peace my Lyrical Oasis 
listen to my words
while I play each
metaphor to strum you into
an orgasmic audio

Blossoming into perfect verses
I need you to float on waves
of exquisite delirium

I kiss those fleeting words

But you're
simply here
to observe

Just watch
as I sink

and sink

and

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.sink.

Deep into
verses of
Poetic
Thrusts

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

almost called it Exquisite Delirium ???

another poem inspired by Eminem lol

Reviews

[Jed]

wow this is so clever and intelligent and erotic good god Poetic Thrusts indeed haha loved it

[Bare trees]

With the exception of the first stanza this is really clever poetry. You've combined two elements to produce an interesting poem that hooks the reader and keeps them there till the end. The references stand out with a sensual side we can all understand. Nicely done.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

@Yaritza Garcia that line was a metaphor it had a deeper meaning ... that words have a way of touching your heart penetrating your very core. Thanks for reading and reviewing

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

You lost me at "damn baby I hit your spot". It all sounded very juvenile to me.

[Shane Blackheart]

I loved this one. Whenever I read your poetry I always get a steady rapping rhythm in my head and it just seems to go with a beat, this poem included.

[Coyote Poetry]

Good words and flow of poem make it a pleasure to read. You brought me in with strong statements and the I like the end results.
"Blossoming into perfect verses
I need you to float on waves
of exquisite delirium "
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Revery]

All fantastic but especially the ending, sinking into poetic thrust. Very exciting to read. :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Almost sattirical in your deliverance, write like this more often my darling, well done.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I love your style, Samantha. This has a very nice flow, and it's an enthralling read... Very Titillating write! :)

[Little Birdie]

Love the alliteration. I'm usually not the one for erotic-themed poetry, but you word it quite well, so why not.