A Man's Man

A guy walks in
he is basically a burly
reasonably fit shady looking f****r
chest like a barrel
and hands made of fists

He portrays the image
that he is a man's man
like Bukowski or Hemingway

He sets down at the bar
eyeballs everybody

He spoke without speaking
Because silence is the loudest sound

Experience was written
all over his face
it said he could
f**k like art
suck like poetry
touch like fire
make any woman
scream like opera
and cum like nature

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

this is still a work in progress ....

The first 8 lines are by robert-james who's poem "The Writer" inspired this

Reviews

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

@leppero of course I asked him a while ago when I had a page there now I cant even see that website he said it was ok then. Keep digging that hole lol funny do I really need to tell you the definition of the word plagiarism I guess so...........

(Plagiarism) a piece of writing that has been copied from someone else and is presented as being your own work

READ THE F*****G AUTHORS NOTE I NEVER PRESENTED IT AS MINE I GAVE HIM CREDIT FOR HIS 8 LINES

WOW You can understand the first word or two I sure hope so cause you sound like an idiot !!!

Why would anyone give credit for using one word that's not saying anything any one else has already. OK lets use the two words in your review "I can" are you gonna give credit to everyone who has said that or even written it Dumb dumb dumb I tell you!!!

To give credit to a specific person you have to use more than a word or two and yes I used 8 lines so freaking what I gave credit and got permission I did nothing wrong so f**k off get a life write something meaningful that is if you can or do you just go around harassing peoples work your jealous of cause it sure looks that way

[hemihead]

Nope...you stole it. Credit after you've been busted is not the same thing as asking the writer beforehand my dear. Fail.

[hemihead]

The first 8 lines of this were written by a friend of mine, about me, and were posted on deepunderground poetry a fair while ago. Shame on you.

[Pratik]

Great work.. :) Every woman's dream I guess a Man's man rather a superman you speak about in your poem.. :)

[Jibey]

You pick up the portrait in the opening lines and fill out the characteristics of this masculine poser, the stuff of men's magazines... and of female fantasies...