Wow, I was happy with it. LoL It was very erotic with the right hint of raunchy. I think you made one mistake, you spelled "Felling" and I think you meant "Feeling". Just a typo.
Otherwise very well written. This is an awesome adult poem.
I have to agree with Revery a very unique style indeed and I love it your poetry always turns me on hehe I loved this poem even the sadness in it was beautiful your such an amazing writer you always leave me in awe and hard ;) Hunger indeed youve made me very very hungry
Samantha, you have such a unique style of weaving the erotic into verse and mingling the two. The erotic is the verse and the verse is the erotic. I followed your words to wc sometime ago. You have been a poet I have followed from the start. You are incredibly talented. As always an excellent write.
I always feel like a child enjoying things too hard for its age of comprehension, when I read your work. And though I hate the sexual overtones (simply because I am a prude!) I can't deny it. You are worthy of scribing for the gods. You do i must say keep love somehow wrapped in with the erotic, and so I can't call it base animal descriptions. It is integrated, mature, exceptionally worded. Cleverley crafted. Thankyou.
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