Bird Song

something beautiful with a dreamy flow

and love
it was beautiful
like calm blue seas
that caressed the shores
she was baptized in water
that hurled itself over steep
mountainous cliffs into the tide...

and love
it was passionate like
the fires that burn deeply in
the earth's core he was seared in a heat
that charred loneliness from the hide...

don't tame her
the wind chide
oh the beauty of peace
like gilded doves how rare her
uncaged spirit softly sang...

fly high young sparrow...

don't reframe him
let the soul like water flow
ridin' that rainbow 'ever it go
as 'nother song that bird sing...

once they were one

flying higher as two
are they feelin' it
so musical
within their
'marrow'...



By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

The shape of the poem is like that of a bird egg

both paintings are watercolor

Reviews

[Tim Thompson]

I liked your poetry. It is something I have never seen before so I will tell you this I don't believe you plagiarized this from anyone.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

thank you

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

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[Samantha ~virginpoet]

@tammytownend youve already said this so what your gonna post the same review on all my stuff well have fun

NOTHING has been proven you will be sued for slander I HAVE NEVER STOLEN POETRY FROM ANYONE IN MY LIFE so believe what you like

how are you gonna feel when its been proven I AM NOT the plagiarist and you've been harassing the wrong person

have you even looked at the posting dates which prove I wrote it and posted it first or are you blind

[Jed]

amazing I loved it the shape the flow the whole thing was brilliant and gos to show how talented you are I have a feeling your gonna be famous one day the world NEEDS to see you work

[Larry Dyson]

great watercolor and the poem is super good.

[Larry Dyson]

Nice watercolors and i love this part
"don't tame her
the wind chide
oh the beauty of peace
like gilded doves how rare her
uncaged spirit softly sang..."

[Arena]

beautiful.. interesting form and shape.. soft words that really give the reader a rise.
"flying higher as two
are they feelin' it
so musical
within their
'marrow'..."
nice read..liked it

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Beautiful layout, wonderful words, enticing lyrics. Great job

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for the beautiful artwork and poetry. I like to hear the birds sing. Create a peace. I like to hear a bird crying for their mate. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote