Paradise

Images frozen
without a sound

Memories echoes
so profound

Sincere whispers
from the past

Haunting words
that seem to last

Spoken moments
held so dear

Lost as if
never near

Deep within my
scattered dreams

Silence hides
my darkened screams

Where butterflies use to fly

Hidden in the mist
I sit and cry

Alone in my darkness I slowly die

Can't you hear
my muttered pleads 

As my heart
tearfully bleeds

Come and help
enlighten me

Help me find my way
so I can flee

Will you save me
from the dark of night

Can you Hear
my melodies
true delight

As I sing for life

Beauty flows
upon your light

As I come to you
upon my knees

Knelled before you my king

As you enrich me
from within

Unwrap my ties
and come on in

Dwelling upon
my pearly gates

As paradise
will be our fate

Ecstasies entwined
I will show you how I grind

Pleasures exceed as I whine

As you release
what's trapped in me

Setting all my butterflies free

By Samantha Campbell

Reviews

[Balls:)]

this is really great. i cant explain how much

[M.Babu]

Very immaculate description! This part i thoroughly loved Samantha!:

"Sincere whispers
from the past
Haunting words
that seem to last"

Though to be honest i didn't quite get this part:
"Silence hides
my darken screams" darkness maybe????

Anyway this was nice! Definitely liked it:)

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Passionate, lonely imagry of a woman longing for love and tenderness. I particulary like "Deep winin my shattered dreams, silence hides my darkened dreams".
I've felt that passion myself

[The Doctor]

this is wonderful. I love the transition between hurt, to want to love. The whole time i was thinking of someone, someone i wanted like this. Keep up the great work.

[Tasha]

This was so beautiful and very well written. :P

[HopelesslyDevoted]

beautiful ending

[J.e.s.s.i.c.a]

this is great :)

[The old me]

Very beautiful. Very enjoyable and well written.

[Forest Green]

This is very nice...the illusion of butterflies intone very well the lightness of the tender lines...excellent.

Steel