Loss of Sensation

Cant speak

Cant breath

Trying not to choke
on the passion
that's trying
to seep inside
my throat

Holding me
in thrall

Enthused

Confused

My brain
blows a fuse

The flow seeps
through my veins
it highlights
my passions
and showcases my
darkest desires

Just the concept
of the flow
seduces my soul

Now come on Kisses

I know you
want my lips
and all that
my body contains

Placing gentle kisses
all over my flesh
enticing me
with your tongue

Your kiss is cosmic
every move is magic

No longer
an imagination
because Ive imagined
and what I thought
was real was simply
an illusion

I was delusional

My high starts to roll
with the stunts
pushing with
pinning moves
onto the taste buds

Take a bite
of my lips
give it a stroke
across the tongue
encapsulating
circling tracing patterns
and running trails
around my soul

Your kiss was all
I needed to be free

Fulfilling the hunger
that our bodies craved

Let my mouth
stay slick
as it glides

Wanting to swallow
not knowing
which way to go

So just let it
lay around pulsating

Splish
Splash

Your slippery
tongue
is so
fast

You got me drowning
in an orgasmic wave

Gently blowing
beautiful sensations
as you stroke my chest
with your fingertips

Softly ever so gentle
with your touch

As my insides erupt
like a Volcano
giving way
to hot lava
flowing
through
my body

Hypnotizing
with your moves
our bodies
will be locked
and bound
our hearts
are opening up
we're falling
into each other

I'm the Earth
your a Cataclysmic variable

A black hole

The cause of such
a tragic fate
the combustion
of these fiery rhymes

Spontaneous
Combustion
more volatile than any
volcanic eruption
dispersing magma
across your terrain
inferno so rampant
it severs all sensation

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

The line "Your kiss is cosmic every move is magic" is from Katy Perry's song ET it inspired this poem.

A Cataclysmic variable is A type of binary star system where from time to time one star gains some of the other star’s matter. As this happens a huge amount of light is given off.

Reviews

[LA Lorena]

This was a sensual piece of artistic imagery. Very well done!

[Basil Piazza]

This was just amazing. This should be on the front page. I loved it a lot.

[Karina Anderson]

This was rather captivating and riveting. Nice job of parallelism in your lines and the rhyme scheme is clever. Well put together [:

[Lilly Negoi]

this poem leaves you gasping for air - it won't let you breathe until you finish reading it...

[Matthew Smith]

This was like a fast-paced punch in the face. The speed and fluidity of it was akin to watching some sort of mental movie, a cascade of images. Very nice, very sensual and the wording was...ah...descriptive. xD Some very interesting comparisons, too.

Like a cataclysmic variable star. I'm surprised someone else even knows what that is, and even moreso that I was used like such in a poem. Amusing.

Great write. I thoroughly enjoyed this.

[Rossen]

This is a stellar write! Gushing with molten poetry and sounds of wet
kissing. written with an eargasmic quality layered in a dream like steam...
nice to have crossed your path Samantha Campbell,
Rossen~

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Samantha, an incredibly well written piece of art

[HopelesslyDevoted]

great work, could a be an awesome song i think

[Jonathan]

I just exploded in my pants of how good this was
The flow was great but the slow build made ir that much more enjoyable
Good job and keep up the good work.

[The Doctor]

this is amazing...mindblowingly amazing...it's beautiful. I could practically feel all that was being described, see it, sense it, i love it so much. I can't get over how good it is, please keep up the extravagant work.