Loss of Sensation

Cant speak

Cant breath

Trying not to choke
on the passion
that's trying
to seep inside
my throat

Holding me
in thrall

Enthused

Confused

My brain
blows a fuse

The flow seeps
through my veins
it highlights
my passions
and showcases my
darkest desires

Just the concept
of the flow
seduces my soul

Now come on Kisses

I know you
want my lips
and all that
my body contains

Placing gentle kisses
all over my flesh
enticing me
with your tongue

Your kiss is cosmic
every move is magic

No longer
an imagination
because Ive imagined
and what I thought
was real was simply
an illusion

I was delusional

My high starts to roll
with the stunts
pushing with
pinning moves
onto the taste buds

Take a bite
of my lips
give it a stroke
across the tongue
encapsulating
circling tracing patterns
and running trails
around my soul

Your kiss was all
I needed to be free

Fulfilling the hunger
that our bodies craved

Let my mouth
stay slick
as it glides

Wanting to swallow
not knowing
which way to go

So just let it
lay around pulsating

Splish
Splash

Your slippery
tongue
is so
fast

You got me drowning
in an orgasmic wave

Gently blowing
beautiful sensations
as you stroke my chest
with your fingertips

Softly ever so gentle
with your touch

As my insides erupt
like a Volcano
giving way
to hot lava
flowing
through
my body

Hypnotizing
with your moves
our bodies
will be locked
and bound
our hearts
are opening up
we're falling
into each other

I'm the Earth
your a Cataclysmic variable

A black hole

The cause of such
a tragic fate
the combustion
of these fiery rhymes

Spontaneous
Combustion
more volatile than any
volcanic eruption
dispersing magma
across your terrain
inferno so rampant
it severs all sensation

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

The line "Your kiss is cosmic every move is magic" is from Katy Perry's song ET it inspired this poem.

A Cataclysmic variable is A type of binary star system where from time to time one star gains some of the other star’s matter. As this happens a huge amount of light is given off.

Reviews

[Miss Fox]

The lack of punctuation creates a sort of rushed flow of thought, much like how the mind would be moving at such a point ;) it's a gret capture of such passionat emotions and actions. You get the reader hot without having to put a maturity warning. Well done, ma'am.

[CaseyIshmael]

Pretty great for a "virgin" poet!

[E.V. Black]

Intense. Extremely intense. Wow. I think that was sex, and an orgasm, without even seeming sensual. "Cosmically" brilliant job. :)
Good job on the research, too. Way to get into the topic of your writing. :D

[JustNeedToBeHappy]

Lovely flow here, fantastic imagery :)

[Henry Clemmons]

Lovely hot, in a kool way. No wasted words. Like that.

[Brad Nugent]

I love this style - and it matches the subject matter perfectly. Your words flow beautifully. Well done - and keep on writing.

[writing mojo]

Your writing is light years away from what Katy Perry's stupid brain could ever fathom.. She should be paying you to write her stuff...amazing stuff..I am a huge fan

[nishantshah2381]

experimental write

[Matthew Kult]

Tastefully walked the line of arousal and seduction. Mastefully crafted with and great flow.

Matthew