Love is a Puzzle

Beginning with my mind
tingling my insides
with fires flickering
flaming tongue
swimming in my heart
bathing in my soul
my lips play a melody
orchestrated for your ears alone

As I whisper
with these words
I want a shiver
going down
your spine

I allowed
my mind
to relax
as our bodies
formed
an unbreakable pact
heating up from
the uncensored
raw uncut
contact

You have not
experienced real passion
until you had me
over for the night

From one poet to another
we make sense poetically

Were Poetically Connected

You got me beating
on my chest
like King Kong

I would be lying
if I said I didn't adore you
anxious to explore
every bit of you
satisfying
my appetite
with you

Believe me baby
my words are true
I can't explain the feeling
that flows through me
when I read your words
igniting passionate screams

You drew me in
like a stranger with candy
I'm overwhelmed
by your inner beauty
as well as your outer beauty
fascinated with the way
your pen caress
adjectives and verbs
captivated by your metaphors
seduced by your poetry
you keep seducing me
thrilling me
tantalizing mesmerizing
always surprising me
got me visualizing your words
unloading strokes
of our pen
as the flow
of ink
sucked me in

You pulled me into
your world of seduction
stealing my heart
without ample instruction

As you capitalize
on my lowercase
scribbling on
the sections
that matter
opening margins
that took on
invisible barriers
working the print
in a cursive flow
looking at me saying
its perfect
yeah I know
driving me crazy
when you start to
re read
enunciating
to every stroke
that blended
the wetness
as we laid
as we inspired
each other
with whispers
of poetry

The strokes return
more intense
in control
out of control
with the scribbles
came kisses
as the tongues
wrapped lips
tickling hearts
making thirst
drip for hours
bodies engraved
in work
working up a sweat
with silk comfort
the letters came out
loosely
with a burst
of blushing bodies

Let me lick
the tip
of your pen
so we can start again

The ink throbbed
the lines with a story
marked sweet
milk craven
while we establish
intense exposure
for the sun
the shake
was holding
on and enjoying
the pleasures
came
every-time
our pen took breaths
revolutionary
inspired
we rode
the brilliance
to a dazzle drip
of profound beauty
to the face
designed to dissolve away
as you touched my lips

Baby this is my confession
you truly are a blessing
another one of life's lessons
lessening my pain
with your words
enhancing my brain
got me calling
out your name
in vain
in my dreams

You single-handedly
can man handle me

Man handle me man
tonight we can behave
like heathens

I'm your Karma sutra dream
body parts scattered around
Ill leave you unable
to fathom the aftermath

Love is a puzzle
I'm willing to make
the necessary changes
to win your heart
put the broken pieces
back together
one part at a time
wanting to know
every dark part
lurking in your heart

Damn why do you
have to be so far away
you got me ready to play
ready to loose my maiden head
ready to give myself completely

Got me contemplating my next move
I don't wanna disturb the groove
searching through the dictionary
looking for the definition
to define the pictionary beauty
that defines my visionary
sexually enhanced visions
whizzing through my mind
sizzling up my spine
leaving marks on me
like well earned scares

But from now on
at your say so...
If you say so
I will retire my thoughts
smother the flames
tame down my heart
dull down my erotic verse
written just for you

I can understand
it was my fault
for allowing myself
to get caught up
in the whirlwind
of lustful temptations
knowing our hearts
resided in separate destinations
to be broadcasted
over different airwaves
echoing my sentiments
through undiscovered caves

By the way this message
will self-destruct
after it's read

By Samantha Campbell

Reviews

[Rose Masen]

This was so well put. The flow was amazing, it's fresh (literally and figuratively), and my favorite line?
"Let me lick
the tip
of your pen
so we can start again"

WOW! I have chills; my mind ran freely with that. lol Lovely write. ;)

[Forest Green]

Quite the poem...! You've expressed in verse the complete continuum of emotions that can be brought to bear by words thoughtfully chosen.

No needless lyrics or repetition...very nicely done!

Steel

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

wow I really enjoyed this poem I loved all your references to writing and all the content ws beautifully worded and that is such a killer last stanza really funny and original well done with this one

as always 100/100