Any Human Heart

Any Human Heart

A Poem by Samantha ~virginpoet

Dead
Glowing
Smoldering embers
Little sparks
There's a Fire
starting in my heart
Flaming
Burning
Raging
like a forest ablaze
Breaking
Fading
Smoking
Sinking
Despairing
Dying
and rebirth


By Samantha Campbell

© 2011 Samantha ~virginpoet


Author's Note

Samantha ~virginpoet
Ive had a song stuck in my head all day lol so I wrote a poem inspired by the song Rolling in the deep by Adele and I used a line from her song "There's a fire starting in my heart" haven't heard it than go to Itunes and download it

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This poem reminds and reminded me of how my mind is on extremely stressful days/weeks. Where words becomes scribbles intertwined into nothing more then a ball of chaotic knots. Every word, feeling, etc was as if the mind was SCREAMING out the feelings it was able to pull from a jumbled mess. Like each strand in the ball of chaos is loosened as the words are spoken. Lovely.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I haven't heard that song but I don't think that matters as this stands by itself a a lovely poem. The short descending lines works well for the poem. The imagery is wonderfully captivating and I love how you wrapped it up with some hope at the end. Another song it reminded me of was 'Fire in my Heart' by the Super Furry Animals.

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This has a good flow. The choppy pace makes for a good fast-paced ride through the inferno.

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love this poem!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 14, 2011
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