Sweet Unrest

The rhythm of your writings ringing
pulling on my heart strings
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  Pulling
as if I were a bell to be rung
a thing to be toyed with
but you went deeper than that

You awoke in me such a passion
that longs to quench my lusty thirst in you
I moan for you a hungry melody
♩ ♪ ♫ ♬

Desires message mirrored in my eyes
my naked flesh a fresh canvas for you
shall we dance a sweeter tune
rocking wrapped in sweet delight

Lush lips so tenderly pressed
I know what you want
I know what you need
I know your language
for I speak it fluently
I know the way your body moves
and how those moves move me
I can measure love by how a body sways

Just one kiss
enthralls my passion
to the point of explosion down below
chilling and killing and swaying me to and fro
our slow rhythm gives way
I ache to be your favorite flavor

From a deep well of longing
you heard my seductive call
your hands strong yet tender
like that of a skilled lover
experienced in the ways of seduction
and the art of love

They carry me to your surface
where a thousand fingers play
unwrapping my many layers
caressing, fondling my body
teasing me pleasing me

I want you in my mouth
at the back of my throat
I want you between my thighs
with my hands upon your rolling hips
teeth biting tender flesh
nails digging into skin
scratches down your back
as you rise and fall upon me

Through the hills and round again
you took me down to the water
and cast your seed round wild isles
of primal hedonistic need

Where there should be pain only pleasure
sweeping over me in raging waves of red

Lulled to sleep by the music
of your hot breath
in a sweet anguish I rest
until your tide starts to rise
and once again I am summoned to your shore
lured by temptations incantations
come into me penetrate my core
two bodies two voices
merging dancing
fighting f*****g
floating flying
stopping time
rewinding reliving
singing screaming
as we become one

I dream of a time
when my flesh knows your flesh
a time when I don't have to write it into being
so until than I sleep dreaming deeply
and dream in me
so my heart keeps time
❤

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

another poem inspired by Ashley Black almost called it Sweet Unrest
I welcome any and all reviews

Reviews

[M.Babu]

"Lush lips so tenderly pressed
I know what you want
I know what you need
I know your language
for I speak it fluently" Excellent lines these were!

This was nicely done!

~M.Babu~

[Jed]

I loved this poem another favorite I think I need a cold shower haha ;) Who is this Ashley Black that inspires your pen to flow

100/100

[steph]

this is an excellent poem. the inspiration here is awsome, and the expression fantasic... I even like how you added pulling as a dramatic crescendo... Marvellous

[Kimberly S]

wow.. i was almost there.. lost in the words.. i like the organization of words and thoughts here. I especially like the end "merging, dancing, f*****g, fighting, floating, flying stopping time" so true and its not all peaches ... but thats what you convey to me.. that you want it all... the good and the bad..its worth it. And the very ending.. "i dream of a time... " f*****g awesome! i would read it again happily!

[Dilan Gray]

You described things well, the images were vivid and clear. I liked the emphasis you put on "pulling".

[J.A.N]

"I dream of a time
when my flesh knows your flesh
a time when I don't have to write it into being
so until than I sleep dreaming deeply
and dream in me
so my heart keeps time"

absolutely beautiful ending,
everything word, so vivid,
visual, every line, amazing write.

-j

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

I don't know what to say in all honesty I like the structure and like others have said the way you put pulling in a single line was great and the last quarter especially this part was really good
two bodies two voices
merging dancing
fighting f*****g
floating flying
stopping time
rewinding reliving
singing screaming
as we become one
had a great rhythm I'm glad that I inspire you to write so much although I should actually write something today well written though very very vivid imagery

[Margaret Marie Hubbard]

Something powerful needing to be unleashed for certain. I too love the "pulling" aspect! Great job!

[Samantha (:]

This is absolutely amazing. I'm not really one for the subject matter, because I'm incredibly sexually awkward, but I really enjoyed this piece. I also liked the way you put the word pulling, a letter on each line, to represent something being pulled. I really like the vivid descriptions and language. You're an amazing poet. (: