I Surrender

A reply to Ashley Black's Rendezvous With The Virgin poet

Your passionate words
send my mind spinning
into a shameful fantasy

The softness of your lips
I Desire desire scorched
my hands on your face
as I pull you close
and gently kiss
your sweet mouth
Biting in little nips
Lips part tongues meet
I press beyond
to ease my thirst
Growing arousal
consumes me in flames
as kisses feathered
slowly over aching flesh
tender pleasures burning
wells of glorious pain

Your hands were like music
traveling the page of my body
reading the movements like braille
and strumming my spine like a baseline
our bodies synchronizing
to the inner beat of desires erotic rhythm
Bodies warm with passions heat
our cries as bodies yield a hot beat
to which we moved
in perfect time
with perfect sync
You took me to the edge
and rocked me hard
Still to tender lasting love
I opened my chest
til my hungry heart
was plainly seen

My sense of time
began to blur
I must have known
you from before
how else could you
have reached my core so fast
I must have loved
you in the past

Your kisses that are only words
as we sit fully clothed
a world apart f*****g with words
I know your hands
they make me
s-s-sh-sh-ah-huder
how could words
have felt so much
and cause a chill
without a touch

You saw the raw desire
I could not hide
you looked at me
and saw inside

Your soft muscled skin
that dips and rises
like the Sahara desert dunes
sends me to fevers

My legs wrap themselves
and entwine themselves
in loves embrace
thrusting in abandon
from my position on top
anxiously awaiting,
to soon see
what its all about

But alas you've fucked me in verses
had your way with me
using only your words
you've made me yearn and burn
for the thing unknown to me
I give in
I surrender
to your wanton ways.

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

Many Thanks go to Ashley Black for inspiring this

Reviews

[Jed]

That was so freaking HOT you have no idea amazing poem yet again I completely agree with SpokenWord

100/100

[SpokenWord]

Samantha: This was truly beautiful erotica that kept us all on the edge of our seats wanting to see the next erotic stroke of your pen. Very nice writing and a great scene you wrote out. I loved it.

it was amazing, so vivid and passionate. it was lustful and flirtly. just amazing.

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

These words the passion that desire you speak off all inspired by me wow you have such an erotic mind you have a beautiful lustful way with words very well done your so very talented this is going straight into my faves well done x x x x x

[Dilan Gray]

I love your descriptions, they are beautiful and I can imagine everything. This is wonderful!

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Many thanks go to Ashley Black for inspiring this