Black Ink

Ravenous
I devour the words
that spill from his pen
starving for one more line
one more taste of passion
to sink my teeth into
to hold in my mouth
to roll around
with my silver
tipped tongue
to melt away
the wordy shell
and eat the passion
hidden within
If i could put
these words aside
and have you
the poet by my side
and have my breathy words
of adoration spilling hot air onto your skin
Id have my lips tracing patterns and running trails
spouting sonnets between your thighs
oh how I love the way you cum

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

well what can I say about this? it was inspired by Ashley Black's writings hence the title Black Ink

is it just me or is that shaped like a penis lol and the pic fitting enough is a painting I made called male orgasm

Reviews

[Sethnicity]

This Is Great! From Tip to Rocks... or Hip to Chase.. from Ball to point your pen dropped the Coolest Joint of the day! You sealed the deal on a long day of reading and work and.... AHhh Life!

Great Writing. Great use of the concrete art form. You obviously have a great sense of humor or a Very open Mind. I mean I thought it.. but then thought maybe a chess Pond piece but I can't help it that was Great! You were the first one in the competition I read! This is a Show stopper!

Nothin But Smiles about this poem! I'm still LOL at my Desk!! if only my coworkers could read this right now! :) Happiness is a Fish you just Caught! :)

[Jed]

beautiful erotica amazing your so talented it crazy btw great painting I paint also ...

[Dilan Gray]

About it being shaped like a penis, yes it kind of is which makes me giggle, I'm not going to lie. About the content, I love it! It is amazing and provacative! Sparks the imagination, great poem!

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

oh my! well my second attempt at an erotic poem must be a response to this wonderfully written poem I loved the shape of your poem very imaginative you clearly have a lot of skill thank you very much for your poem you flatter me